Item: THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER
Rating: 5
Author: Lord_Cthulhu

Lord_CthulhuLv45yr

2020-01-09 14:01

A funny and cool novel, it is very well written and does not have so many grammar mistakes. I love the name of the skeleton, I just hope it has incest. *Wink* *wink* ;)

THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER

SHADOWSLASH

3.9

1296 Chs

Liked by 57 people

Replies32

SHADOWSLASHAuthor

You will know in the future *Wink* *wink*

5yr

Lord_CthulhuLv4

Ok ;D *Wink* *Wink*

SHADOWSLASH:You will know in the future *Wink* *wink*

5yr

TyuiopquarkLv4

There is absolutely no punctuation. How can you claim decent grammar? It only doesn’t have many spelling mistakes. Grammar and spelling are two different things, please don’t confuse them.

5yr

Lord_CthulhuLv4

No me Importa, Sinceramente es Difícil Encontrar Novelas como esta Hoy en Dia. No es Fácil Publicar una Novela Original y te Pregunto ¿Serias Capaz de Hacer una Historia sin Errores y ninguna Falta Ortográfica siendo Solo un Escritor Novato?

Tyuiopquark:There is absolutely no punctuation. How can you claim decent grammar? It only doesn’t have many spelling mistakes. Grammar and spelling are two different things, please don’t confuse them.

5yr

Lord_CthulhuLv4

Valoro el que se Esfuerce en Al Menos Escribir una Historia que no Solo es Divertida sino que muy Interesante ¿Y que si no Escribió Comas y Puntos? Somos Seres Humanos y Podemos Cometer desde el Error mas Estúpido hasta un Error que Podría Acabar con tu Amistad con Alguien.

5yr

Cliff_SamaLv4

This has a ton of grammar mistakes.

5yr

DiligentObserverLv15

You know I think it depends who it's with i've thought for a long time and realised everything, EVERYTHING, is based on perception wether you wonder if something is wrong or right? It's based on your perception of wether it's wrong or right and now to the number one unsolved question.. what happens after someone die's and the only thing I can conclude is, whatever you think, whatever you think will happen will probably happenalmost everything in the world has atleast a small peice of connection to perception.. This is too much philosophical bull**** for a reading website huh. Well whatever you think is what will happen i guess whats your perception on my theory jk i don't like getting comments and don't think anyone else's theory is right so i don't care about your theory.

4yr

DiligentObserverLv15

4yr

JosephmemesLv2

Disgusting

4yr

Hati_3317Lv4

i don't think you understand the point of reviews. you don't give "pity points" just because "the author tried". this is one of the reasons most stories on webnovel are so boosted in ratings ffs

Lord_Cthulhu:Valoro el que se Esfuerce en Al Menos Escribir una Historia que no Solo es Divertida sino que muy Interesante ¿Y que si no Escribió Comas y Puntos? Somos Seres Humanos y Podemos Cometer desde el Error mas Estúpido hasta un Error que Podría Acabar con tu Amistad con Alguien.

4yr

GenezisLv6

Why don't just call this jib something akin Spatial Monster King, spatial akin Space Monster as monster king as title to dominate other weaker monsters

4yr

DreadHead_NovelistLv4

Wtf would you like to uave *** with your sibling

4yr

Shamir_RimalLv11

romance?

4yr

GodKingFinalLv13

wtf... dont have many grammar mistake? how the hell did u read?

4yr

EloenLv2

eww

4yr

SHADOWSLASHAuthor

Btw I am going to make the story more game like as their skills would have change to fit the game like surface.

4yr

Yaboii_BoykaLv4

nah imma go sniff some coke

DiligentObserver:You know I think it depends who it's with i've thought for a long time and realised everything, EVERYTHING, is based on perception wether you wonder if something is wrong or right? It's based on your perception of wether it's wrong or right and now to the number one unsolved question.. what happens after someone die's and the only thing I can conclude is, whatever you think, whatever you think will happen will probably happenalmost everything in the world has atleast a small peice of connection to perception.. This is too much philosophical bull**** for a reading website huh. Well whatever you think is what will happen i guess whats your perception on my theory jk i don't like getting comments and don't think anyone else's theory is right so i don't care about your theory.

4yr

MILARCHLv13

what is the meaning of sans ?

4yr

Demiurge_OharaLv12

means without or nonexistent .

MILARCH:what is the meaning of sans ?

4yr

Modern_AssassinLv14

Fellow daoist SHADOWSLASH, please fix the blatant grammar errors in your story. you've got a great idea here but the grammar stands in it's way. Frankly the grammar is going to push new readers away and even dedicated readers will eventually get tired of it. Appreciate the story.

SHADOWSLASH:Btw I am going to make the story more game like as their skills would have change to fit the game like surface.

4yr

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uncledavieLv13

This is hard to read. The story itself has potential, but the grammar, spelling, and overall continuity of the story needs work. Id recommend getting someone to help edit your chapters or spending more time editing them yourself. Editing your work is how you improve as a writer, so i encourage you to do so. Till then sorry but dropped.

4yr

KoromaLv4

This is one of, if not, the worst thing I have ever read. First off, the MCs name. I know it seems like I'm nitpicking, but really? His actual name is Shadowslash? That is literally the first name that pops into my mind when i think ****ty Sonic the Hedgehog OC. Secondly, the total lack of grammatical anything. If you came here expecting a story with basic things such as punctuation, well sorry to say but you're **** outta luck. Misspellings are also very common. Thirdly, the plot. It's a very generic isekai monster reincarnation. On top of being very generic it's also very forced. Things happen because the plot needs to progress, so don't expect fantastical things such as common sense or logic. Finally, the style. It's dead and dry. Things happen so quickly you could blink and miss it (e.g., he went to the forest to hunt and then he came back). The dialogue (and monologue) is emotionless (e.g., "I found this piece of monster meat but I didn't kill it" "Ok"). Also, you should never use abbreviations such as OMG in a novel as it breaks the flow of story and just plainly looks wierd.

4yr

wonderer_kenLv5

the mere thought of a monster being a monster tamer is a blast for me. 🤯🤯🤯🤯 loving the novel so far😍😍 this novel is one of the disregarded amazing books piece of advice: just try to read this novel and you will not regret it

5yr

catviLv5

Impossible to read. This author for some WEIRD INCOMPREHENSIBLE REASON uses no Full stops/periods. The grammar looks good HOWEVER, you don't know where the sentences end. Impossible to tell.

4yr

Wolfistien123Lv5

Horrible grammer. It dosn't use any full stop and very hard to read. I don't know how it got so many good reviews must be author doing something behind the scenes. it's horrible. I recommend not to read it unless author fixes it.

4yr

Everything_ForeverLv14

The idea of a monster summoning monsters is very interesting but the grammar in this novel is such a buzz kill,it just feels very badly made.

4yr

IamGAwesomeLv14

A good novel. Funny and relaxing in such a way that the characters are written in an adorably unique description. I kind of understand the release time since the author is a student so it is a given. Nevertheless, I am still looking forward to read more of this novel. 😍 More power!

5yr

Darkly5Lv13

Im sorry if I sound like a bad guy but this story needs some serious work on its grammar and also story, like it says it passes a whole week instantly Without giving much clue as too what happened. It instantly transfers to him adventuring without giving much explanation. Basically the story loses its interest very quickly due to how its written and doesnt sound well thought out.

4yr

MeruloxLv2

The writting and grammar is shit. It looks like it was written by a 11 year old for an essay. Read the beginning of the first actual chapter and felt like throwing up

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