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TheNormalMan
TheNormalManLv144yr
2020-05-03 13:21

I'm I seriously the only one that reviewing this novel Good novel by the way Great potential 💪 __________________________________________________

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Daolord777
Daolord777Lv13

it says you read 0 zero chapters...........

TheDolphin
TheDolphinLv13

That doesn't mean anything. Could have read on a different account, read it offline, just clicked back to check for comments, WN just being glitchy, etc. It's not rare.

Daolord777:it says you read 0 zero chapters...........
ArashiTenebris
ArashiTenebrisLv5

still, can you at least say the pros and cons of this novel and the interesting part ?, just barebone like that then how new reader know what to expect ?

AaNnNnAaLlIiNn
AaNnNnAaLlIiNnLv4

this chapter is good

PonjuPonju
PonjuPonjuLv4

Um. Why would the author use a paint of the Louis and Clark Exploration for his book cover?!. Seriously?🤔 Note: they used and air rifle to hunt with during it, due to a no gunpowder available. So - an early record for a BB/Pellet gun! 😉

TobascoDragoon
TobascoDragoonLv13

Um...? No?

Michael_Ryman
Michael_RymanAuthor

It is NOT a painting of the Lewis (note spelling) and Clark expedition.

PonjuPonju:Um. Why would the author use a paint of the Louis and Clark Exploration for his book cover?!. Seriously?🤔 Note: they used and air rifle to hunt with during it, due to a no gunpowder available. So - an early record for a BB/Pellet gun! 😉
PonjuPonju
PonjuPonjuLv4

I see. still, it looks just like it. has the two time period woodsmen as well as the two Native American ladies that served as guides... honestly, it fits right in with Louis and Clark Illustrated works that you'd see in the history museum - right down to the artist's style. it'd be very hard to say it wasn't an image of their outing. *shrug* it looks identical to one, so really wondered why something like that would be used. 🤔

Michael_Ryman:It is NOT a painting of the Lewis (note spelling) and Clark expedition.
PonjuPonju
PonjuPonjuLv4

right. Google auto ate the name...

Michael_Ryman:It is NOT a painting of the Lewis (note spelling) and Clark expedition.
Michael_Ryman
Michael_RymanAuthor

I don't see any ladies in this picture, just four guys. IIRC, the picture depicts Álvar Núñez Cabeza de Vaca's expedition across southern North America in the sixteenth century. It's public domain, don't have the link but you can find it if you look hard enough.

PonjuPonju:I see. still, it looks just like it. has the two time period woodsmen as well as the two Native American ladies that served as guides... honestly, it fits right in with Louis and Clark Illustrated works that you'd see in the history museum - right down to the artist's style. it'd be very hard to say it wasn't an image of their outing. *shrug* it looks identical to one, so really wondered why something like that would be used. 🤔
Michael_Ryman
Michael_RymanAuthor

Don't EVER trust Google. It's right 90% of the time, but the 10% when it's wrong can be disastrous.

PonjuPonju:right. Google auto ate the name...
PonjuPonju
PonjuPonjuLv4

yep. meant, Google auto-correct ate the name though. it's why my comments end up weird on here sometimes. even correcting the changes, it can still flip it when hitting add/post button. but still... *shrug*

Michael_Ryman:Don't EVER trust Google. It's right 90% of the time, but the 10% when it's wrong can be disastrous.
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