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Rebeca
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2020-08-24 02:35

Firstly, I should say that I love the story!!!! I rarely read a story with less than 200 chapters, but this story just seemed so much fun. It’s a light story of a girl with a faithful to her dream. It’s upbeat and so far it has avoided the intense drama, angst, and generalized killing of Dungeon stories. It reminds me a little of the mood of japanese adventurer light novels. I have one complaint: 3 chapters a week is too few!!!! But no pressure, I keep counting the hours for the next chapter. And I have a few doubts: why haven’t the army of the different countries of the world moved to take control of the resources of the maze? Who is in charge of the guild and how is it able to mantain itself independent from the government? If I think of more questIons, I write later.

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Perizou
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I'm really happy you are enjoying it! I wanted to give a more mellow feel to it even with the monster hunting aspect of it. when I started I was doing 4 chapters a week but that was making me burnout really fast x.x So I opted for a more manageable number. I'm always trying to improve and hopefully, I can make more chapters per week soon. To answer your questions: Before the great invasion, the guild didn't exist. Each country took care of its own entrances and the government implemented taxes on everything. Then the invasion came. Monsters from all layers rallied under the same flag and pushed back the explorers. Individually, no country was able to hold back the monsters, only when the humans gathered under a group that they managed to win the war. That lead to the creation of the guild. An organization dedicated to the maze and nothing else. That way in times of need there wouldn't be so much red tape around everything that people needed to do. Today the army goes inside the maze to take control of resources but they use the entrances in the military bases, and that leads to different rooms. Because every room is connected to at least 2 more rooms the actual size of the maze grows exponentially as you go in deeper layers. The people who are in charge of the maze are part of a board of directors of sorts, but they are all high-level explorers by themselves there is 1 chairperson who right now is a character that briefly showed up. But that's not the last time the character appears and it won't be long before said character shows up again. If you have any more question please ask. They help me flush out the world hahaha, and if you don't want to wait you can ask in the discord server. The links are at the end of the chapters.

SRSH12345
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I am totally loving your work but would hate to see you experience a burnout. Take your time if you get stressed or hit that stage. You are already producing a top-notch webnovel. Even if you take a break to slow down or walk away temporarily, people like myself will still be checking back here because the story is just too good.

Perizou:I'm really happy you are enjoying it! I wanted to give a more mellow feel to it even with the monster hunting aspect of it. when I started I was doing 4 chapters a week but that was making me burnout really fast x.x So I opted for a more manageable number. I'm always trying to improve and hopefully, I can make more chapters per week soon. To answer your questions: Before the great invasion, the guild didn't exist. Each country took care of its own entrances and the government implemented taxes on everything. Then the invasion came. Monsters from all layers rallied under the same flag and pushed back the explorers. Individually, no country was able to hold back the monsters, only when the humans gathered under a group that they managed to win the war. That lead to the creation of the guild. An organization dedicated to the maze and nothing else. That way in times of need there wouldn't be so much red tape around everything that people needed to do. Today the army goes inside the maze to take control of resources but they use the entrances in the military bases, and that leads to different rooms. Because every room is connected to at least 2 more rooms the actual size of the maze grows exponentially as you go in deeper layers. The people who are in charge of the maze are part of a board of directors of sorts, but they are all high-level explorers by themselves there is 1 chairperson who right now is a character that briefly showed up. But that's not the last time the character appears and it won't be long before said character shows up again. If you have any more question please ask. They help me flush out the world hahaha, and if you don't want to wait you can ask in the discord server. The links are at the end of the chapters.
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