The worldbuilding in this one is absolutely superb. The whole stats thing, special hidden skills, abnormal growth rate, explorers and the MAZE remind me of Danmachi a bit, and I absolutely love Danmachi, so that's a huge plus. I love the intricacies with the attributes and how the skills interact with them. I also love the concept of the three heroes and the almost religious air to them. There's just so much good about this novel I can't really list them without this review getting too long. Hera is an amazing, relatable MC who has very subtle character development. There's a ton of stuff you can infer about her just from the way her charisma stat makes her "prettier" to how she folds under pressure and doesn't think to redistribute her points before leaving. There are a good amount of grammar errors, most of them being with tenses (using past tense and then switching to present for a sentence or two) but everything is still understandable and since you're a non-native speaker it's fine. The story is still very, very enjoyable. Your writing is descriptive and I can envision every scene. You also have a unique writing style or aesthetic that makes MAZE a real treat to read. Definitely an underrated gem. Will be reading more!
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LIKEWow, I just... have no words, thank you so much for this review! I intend to make some side stories telling more about the three heroes to give everyone a better understanding of why they are so big for explorers. I do apologize for grammar errors and I will do my very best to have as few as possible. I hope you guys can bear with me for some time while I improve. And I truly wish that those errors don't stop anyone from enjoying the story.
As A native speaker, Your grammar is fine! Yes sometimes there are errors, but nothing that makes it difficult to understand. fret not perizou, we can Infer what youre saying with context. Youre doing great darling!
Perizou:Wow, I just... have no words, thank you so much for this review! I intend to make some side stories telling more about the three heroes to give everyone a better understanding of why they are so big for explorers. I do apologize for grammar errors and I will do my very best to have as few as possible. I hope you guys can bear with me for some time while I improve. And I truly wish that those errors don't stop anyone from enjoying the story.