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InoueAkio
InoueAkioLv134yr
2020-01-23 16:18

Lol....This story feels like a melodramatic drama where you can easily predict future instances, not innovative indeed... I feel the MC is a little retarded where he's taking the truth in amusement while her disciple keep on using dildo and vibrators for her sexual gratification...She seems to trodding on hentai path without MC's knowledge..(then what's your use since I can only see MC just indulging in sexual acts) Apart from that I don't know whether MC gonna have any breakthroughs or just playing nanny to those disciples cause whole idea was to recruit potential candidates who can reach immortality and guide them while aiming for higher breakthroughs, but here he's just playing around the mortality crap while being an immortal till now and untill now character growth is worst for me...

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