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OSalted_Fish
OSalted_FishLv34yr
2021-03-20 22:45

I have read till 1334 ( RAW ), it was released few hours ago. I wont give any spoilers. MC keeps on trying to lose money but everytime something *new* happens and he gains money. Take it as slice of life not as business management. Semi-spoiler -- companies MC has at 1334 chapter - 1. 2 Gaming companies, 1 VR game company 2. House rental company 3. Cafe + computer 4. "Suffering" Travels company ( Newest ) 5. Investors company 6. Company than supports indie game developers 7. Twitch like company 8. Webnovel like company 9. Movie shooting company 10. E sports like company 11. Phone company 12. Physical experiance shops 13. Gym 14. Food delivary 15. Delivary company 16. steam ( gaming ) like company Companies are written in random, dont worry about knowing which company is next. Spoiler end --- You might think Author would ignore some of them but author tries to combine them. I'll give an example - "After she completed shooting ad for new game she came to new home ( by home rental company ). After practicing "certain Gym" equipment, she went to play with "certain brand's" VR device" Author also tries to give reasons for not falling to "linkage" with other companies. I really hope author wont launch more companies, it would be harder to not ignore some of them

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Falle_Daybreak
Falle_DaybreakLv2

What about the romance aspect of this novel... ?

OSalted_Fish
OSalted_FishLv3

no romance so far

OSalted_Fish
OSalted_FishLv3

no romance so far

Falle_Daybreak:What about the romance aspect of this novel... ?
arc_reader
arc_readerLv15

My money's on some rich girl.

CREAZYMADMAN
CREAZYMADMANLv10

You lose your money, the novel has ended without any romance.

arc_reader:My money's on some rich girl.
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At first, this novel has an interesting concept. Thus, I read all the way to 500 plus chapters(after reading here, I go find the raw site and read further). However, because this is an interesting concept, it is very hard to maintain quality. After reading past 500 plus chapters, the storyline is getting old. MC still tries his hardest to lose money in the company but almost always fails. I see a huge flaw in this novel. If MC really wants to lose money so badly, all he has to do is develop his product poorly(barely pass the standard of the system), then put the rest of his money in the promotion of the product. This way, when consumer sees the product advertisement and try it then found out the product sucks, then they will most likely blacklist MC product in the future. Thus, MC will always lose money. Instead, in this novel, MC put a lot of money in product development which ends up having a good quality product, and then he hopes that no one will find it. This kind of thinking of MC causes him to fail every time (it is enjoyable to read this kinda thing at the beginning, but then it's getting old when this kind of situation keeps on repeating itself throughout 500 plus chapters). That is a major flaw, it is very hard to keep this storyline interesting with this kind of concept without making the reader feeling bored because the storyline repeats itself over and over again. Because even I can see how to let MC lost money every time (and I'm not in the gaming or entertainment industry). As said, all he has to do is produce barely passable product(in order to pass the system requirement), then put all his money into advertising the product, it is more likely that his product will have a bad review and lost money as a result. Sum it up, a very interesting idea for this novel, but it is hard to keep the storyline interesting.

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