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Ekon
EkonLv115yr
2020-03-27 16:20

Just read chapter 1 and I can tell you that this novel will be great. I always love this types of novel. Please don’t disappoint me🙏🙏🙏...............................................Why do I have to write more than I should 😡

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SauceMaster64
SauceMaster64Lv6

Because this is supposed to be a review and not a comment.

MrEasy
MrEasyLv4

NOOB

Ekon
EkonLv11

I will not disagree with you on this part. I only do this type of review when I like the novel or know it will be great novel. Overall, I only do it sometime. I read all 60 chapter and it great. I just love to see mc fail here like every time when he think he will do it but in the end bad luck which also a good luck hit him hard.

SauceMaster64:Because this is supposed to be a review and not a comment.
Ekon
EkonLv11

Don’t consider myself noob but ok.

MrEasy:NOOB
MrEasy
MrEasyLv4

It's a Joke, I am a easy going person and don't comment too much but at that time I was in a good mood so wrote it.

Ekon:Don’t consider myself noob but ok.
Ekon
EkonLv11

It all good. It boring here anyway. If I try to leave the house my mom and dad will kill me. Typical Asian parent.

MrEasy:It's a Joke, I am a easy going person and don't comment too much but at that time I was in a good mood so wrote it.
miz_jim
miz_jimLv5

😃😃😃

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At first, this novel has an interesting concept. Thus, I read all the way to 500 plus chapters(after reading here, I go find the raw site and read further). However, because this is an interesting concept, it is very hard to maintain quality. After reading past 500 plus chapters, the storyline is getting old. MC still tries his hardest to lose money in the company but almost always fails. I see a huge flaw in this novel. If MC really wants to lose money so badly, all he has to do is develop his product poorly(barely pass the standard of the system), then put the rest of his money in the promotion of the product. This way, when consumer sees the product advertisement and try it then found out the product sucks, then they will most likely blacklist MC product in the future. Thus, MC will always lose money. Instead, in this novel, MC put a lot of money in product development which ends up having a good quality product, and then he hopes that no one will find it. This kind of thinking of MC causes him to fail every time (it is enjoyable to read this kinda thing at the beginning, but then it's getting old when this kind of situation keeps on repeating itself throughout 500 plus chapters). That is a major flaw, it is very hard to keep this storyline interesting with this kind of concept without making the reader feeling bored because the storyline repeats itself over and over again. Because even I can see how to let MC lost money every time (and I'm not in the gaming or entertainment industry). As said, all he has to do is produce barely passable product(in order to pass the system requirement), then put all his money into advertising the product, it is more likely that his product will have a bad review and lost money as a result. Sum it up, a very interesting idea for this novel, but it is hard to keep the storyline interesting.

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