Review Detail of Jules_West in Reincarnated as a Dragon!?

I'm gone be shameless and review my own novel yes I'm shameless I know it. and I thought this is a good way to say some stuff about my own story. I'm trying to go over the chapters and correct weird sentences and grammar mistakes I know I make them a lot but I have 3 proofreaders: Leugim, lollipop, and kingstef_games. so we're trying to edit old chapters and make them more readable. I know more story isn't the best but this is my second novel soo I'm still practicing. and I'm writing this for fun so don't expect that this is the best novel ou there. that was it and at this moment I haven't dropped it if you're curious i see some comments asking if i dropped it and i haven't so yeah.