Jules_West
If only I didn't have to sleep, I might have enough time for all my hobbies...
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Jules_West1yrReplied to HFurtadoCh 5 Twisted Firestarter- Jules_West1yrReplied to mail_404Ch 3 But nothing ever happens
- Jules_West1yrReplied to linn_on_line
Of course not😂 you can access the lock from both the inside and outside; it works the same with my house's lock.
My eyes shot around the table, looking for my keys; next to the fruit bowl were my keys, and I snatched them together with an apple so I wouldn't faint from hunger. I tried to open the front door, but someone had locked it. I fumbled for the right key to unlock the door, which opened with a satisfying click. - Jules_West1yrReplied to linn_on_line
Hah, right, that's wrong; thanks for noticing it!
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As stated in my introduction, I write in British English and not American English. Fetal is correct, but Foetal is also right in this situation, as I'm writing in British English.
The voice had sent me inside of somewhere dark, sticky, and slimy, the place felt cramped, and it felt like I was lying in a foetal position. I started to struggle against this prison, but nothing happened; I struggled more. - Jules_West1yrReplied to Robert_Barnett
- Jules_West1yrReplied to linn_on_line
Hah, thank you for noticing the mistake! Dutch just influenced my writing :) I meant tea, which is thee in dutch. My autocorrect didn't correct it; this is why readers are so valuable!
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- Jules_West1yrReplied to linn_on_lineCh 35 Exciting update!
- Jules_West1yrPosted
No reviews? 1,3 million views? 3,48K collections? Why doesn't this novel have no reviews?! Well, dear reader, I've removed all the reviews because they were from the old story, not the new one that will be posted soon or has already been posted here. So why are you posting your review, then? To make sure new readers also know what is happening. For now, you can still read the old novel, but in about 3 to 4 days, that will change, and those chapters will also be removed. But new readers, don't be scared away, because in about 3 to 4 days; new chapters will be posted with, in my opinion, a hundred times the quality than the chapters are right now! So if you have spare time, add this novel to your library and give it a read this Sunday or Monday!
- Jules_West1yrReplied to Ototsu_Yume
Ah, well, it's more or less a rewrite and a remaster; I'm changing Kuro's (He'll also get a new name) motivation entirely. Initially, he was moving forward without a point. Now, the focus will be more or less on returning Elysia to the human continent. Characters will be more fleshed out and act their age. For example, Daena is pretty young but doesn't act like it, at least in my opinion. I'm also removing stuff that didn't make sense and giving it a more realistic spin. So, in the end, it's more or less a rewrite but using the original story as a basis to craft a new and exciting story, which will hopefully be a lot better than the previous attempt. But you'll see for yourself when I release the first 13 or more chapters, which will probably be coming out around September. And for messing up the story, that'll hardly happen as my story is so poorly written that improvement is the only way this story can go!
Ch 68 Update - Jules_West1yrReplied to Deathcount2748Ch 68 Update
- Jules_West2yrCommented
This is a myth, humans use way more that 10% of their brain. Even for the most basic of functions a human needs their intire brain. It’s just something the film industrie came up with. But take everything I say with a grain of salt, I only read books I’m not some brain scientist.
The second part consisted of training someone's mind into using efficient thinking pathways with the help of a spell, which would accelerate the thought processing speed and enhance how much the practitioner would be able to access his brain capacity. Normal Humans would be only able to access only 10%, while Wizards thanks to their Magic enhancing their Biology around 15% although they don't really use it thanks to the lack of Common Sense and Logic. But a practicer of his new Occlumency would be able to access over 30% of one's brain capacity, the limit of the current Humans evolutionary progress. - Jules_West2yrCommented
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Quinn's wiry frame that came with his young age and daily workouts was finally experiencing change, with puberty kicking into full effect. In the last few months, his chest had widened, and not only his arms and legs grew faster, but he also gained some height, finally pushing past the hundred seventy centimeter mark and stopping at hundred seventy-six. - Jules_West2yrReplied to Lolipop8uCh 65 Update!!!
- Jules_West2yrReplied to Francois_7370Ch 64 Flames of Hell
- Jules_West2yrCommented
You really need an editor. You make so many grammar mistakes.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Jules_West2yrReplied to Daku_DoragonCh 64 Flames of Hell
- Jules_West3yrCommented
There is only one song that could be used: The only thing they fear is you
94: Epic Fight Music