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I did not like how she fully turned into a bloodthirsty demon for a simple hiccup on account of her friends. Leaves a bad taste in my mouth. What's the point of her having power if the system is mind controlling her? Made me kinda sad tbh. The story arc in terms of character is threefold. The first is around a quirky genius girl gamer who finds a realistic vrmmorpg. Shesets up a party and becomes famous. The character's goal is to play and level up. So far it is normal. Then the system loses control and the apocolypse starts. It was sorta awkward to see things happening like that in real life since it made no logical sense at first... did the author want to maks the character into a superhero? That's cingy... altough the transition was awkward, the result was interesting. Since there was an apocalypse the game world and real world become identicle. Except that in the real one you could die. So, what kind of world would eventually be created? The character's goal become reviving civilization. Then the third character arc starts. Instead of the transition being awkward, it becomes too sudden. I don't know what to make of it. So, the character who has grown so much suddenly loses all her development and sense of self.... and her personality disappears. All of her bonds to her friends were instantly shattered. She goes almost mad... because her friends called her a slut in some sort of comidic misunderstanding. What? Why? It's so random and makes no sense. What was I reading up till this point? plot twists have to have some foreshadowing for them to be interesting... but it just *poof* pops into existence, and the previous story dissipates from. So the character's goals become to dominate. Makes me feel bad for the mc. I really just don't like this. I stopped at the awkward transition, but it has just gotten worse. Well, you do you author.

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