I don't wanna criticize or anything, but a new arc in which these four constantly insult kat through all of the chapters is kinda annoying. can't she beat them up or something? it was kinda cute the first time, but now they sound like adults, so it's just annoying.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. I actually laughed. that is so evil in concept.

she should have ughhh, dark sight. to be able to see through darkness yeah. it was one of the skill that she was described to have yeah...

when will she get that the first floor is actually the last floor, and that ascending the laberynth is ascending the mountain?

well, yeah, so even if you mess it up a bit. nobody could tell.

DEMONS can translate different languages, so how would it handle when two languages were to be used at the same time? remember what happens when demons DOESN'T manage to perfectly translate it? they get an IDEA of what it is. so, putting those two things back together it isn't too far fetched to say that saying something in a different language in a middle of a sentence would sound weird but change almost nothing for the listening, maybe for the speaker but that's it. yeah.

i honestly don't remember. it's been a while since I read the harry potter books, and yeah it was ij a different language. but I'm sure I didn't read it as avada kadabra. probably abadakadabra so it's still wrong but my point still stands.

yeah in english dude. not everyone speaks the same language even though they read some of the books in harry potter.

wonder if she can invade the thoughts of low level people in the future. using higher will to overcome the skill's limitation. it could be pretty useful. but maybe just making them sleep first is better idk.

I wouldn't recommend it. mc has almost no virtues that I like. the mc has a "I don't give a shit about power" attitude. the world has too many obstacles for people who want to cultivate. there's talent that's been defined from birth, you have to reach enlightenment every level. you can't just power trip your way to it. and like, all of the absurd obstecles were placed by author just so mc could skip over them, and that fact that he doesn't even care just makes it kinda annoying. it's not even amazing. it's just stupid to read about mc utilizating his physiche to just skip barriars that are in everyone else's path without even trying.

well the writing isn't top notch, probably cause the author doesn't know english as a first language. the story is okay but there are a few flaws here and there, and the writing didn't 'draw me in'. so the story was a bit boring. I give it a three.

the first saint of muscles. guiding people unto the path.

everyone including mc is waaaaaayyyy too angry. no, mostly mc. I get anger issues but it sound like she's screaming and raging half the time. but all in all it was a decent read. if only the characters were better. hmmmm mc is in a bad spot and doesn't shine as an overagressive mc when everyone is somewhat civilized. it isn't a cultivation novel and he isn't in hell so why? he/she starts acting like a brat and disrespects his/her parents. they are exteremely violent at the age of six. volume one being infront of a loving family with a calm setting just doesn't match.

haha. why am I laughing at this.

you know, with gay rights activists running around everywhere, wouldn't people be having a fit if she were bullied for being gey?.... just a thought.

the real important question I've been wondering about is, will lilly get to lick kat's legs or not? I need to find out for research purposes.

I certainly hope not, after giving her a fake one almost got her killed. major didn't care either. these people, they're not very trustworthy.