Great Story! But there are a few suggestions I have (Not trying to impose or be rude) 1. Instead of :Name: you should do something like this Name - or Name: 2. Maybe find a way to show when they are speaking or thinking such as using " " when speaking and { } or ( ) for thinking so that it is easier to tell 3. Try Incorporating more conversation between people, the fights are amazing but the characters feel underdeveloped 4. Have more detail for world building, such as describing the kind of weather (this is more important for battles and such as it can add a certain flair) or how a building or Town looks like (kinda confused as to what his city looks like ;-;) These are just suggestions and it is completely up to you whether to incorporate them or something similar/better. I am sorry if It seems rude and mean, I am just trying to help out an author with great potential :)

This Novel is absolutely amazing i started reading it today and the development is awesome I can not wait for more chapters to come out I HIGHLY recommend this to anyone and everyone. I also think the spelling errors give this story a quality because you can still understand what the author is trying to say. P.S if AUTHORSAMA is reading this I suggest yetitroops XD

For all the people who want to expierience the ancient times where all the herotic legends faught, together with our MC who is going to conquer the Lands and will fight with the help of his system and his future knowledge ;)

I'm gonna be honest, the story seems interesting, though it's impossible to read, the writing is done so poorly that i almost deleted it from my library after reading the first few lines, but what made me drop it is the mc. I could get over the horrible writing, i could get over the lack of description of areas, the inconsistency of time while travelling, but man, you have an mc that is a warmongering c*nt, a bastard that can give the order to kill, r*pe and pillage, someone who didn't give a single f*ck when he was talking with a naked woman that just got r*ped, basically my favorite type of mc, and when he is proposed an alliance by marriage, you turn him in a little stuttering and blushing beta b*tch that gets laughed at, thats when it got too much for me, good luck with it.

My biggest turn off is that the author refuses to use decent grammatical punctuation. I couldn’t make it past the fourth chapter because of it. If your not hung up on grammar and spelling then this MC has some potential.

Not worth of time mc is a pure dick like a kid. He wants to wipe a town full of civilians, just because he lost an attack. Also he does not treat his subordinates as human but just a piece on a chess board. Also worst of all it has no harem the author promised someone that it will not have harem damn. The only reason i started reading this is because im a fan of Total war too. But im not here for a maniac character that attacks an enemy without a proper reason at all. Ohh sorry he have a reason it was he wants the town. But he attacked without putting down a table first and discuss what he wants. And thats a big no no!!!

Awful grammar, spelling. Wish fulfillment to the max.dont read it,........................... .mm........................................ .......

Has extremely poor writing, but if the author could just edit his chapters it would make for a good story, probably. -----------------------------------------------

Most likely a kid that made this and doesn’t really give good land design or good character build, story is really rushed and poor build up everywhere, but the concept of the story is nice but really wish he add more back story or build up around a city not just keep moving along with no build up. hard to imagine the land or anything since the author thinks we already have it pre download but if you want to read a book with poor quality and poor characters design then step right up and read this baby. No hard feeling author just an honest review.