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Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv145yr
2019-12-21 19:24

For all the people who want to expierience the ancient times where all the herotic legends faught, together with our MC who is going to conquer the Lands and will fight with the help of his system and his future knowledge ;)

Total War System

Nathan_Hinds
3.9
193 Chs

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maximusmeiss
maximusmeissLv4

Haha porfin un novela de total war estoy llorando de alegria. Your are a god, I was loking for this, for the first moment I read novels, I haven't read it yet, but I will and I will have an orgasm and please go with it because I'm a fan of total war, sins it came the first time, yes total war shogun 1 when my father play it and I saw him. Then I played medieval 2 , shogun 2 the best, and Rome 1 and 2, oh and alexander yeah there where incredible, more of them were the empire total war and the napolonic I play most the shogun 2 the original and the fall of the samurai. Well I don't like so much the warhammers because of the magic and stuff, well they are magnificent in there way. Thrones of brittania and three kingdom look well. I want them but at the same time my pc will crash and that's not good well in other word go on with the novel because it has potential and it will shine in my dark days. With all sincerity Max

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CursedSans
CursedSansLv4

Great Story! But there are a few suggestions I have (Not trying to impose or be rude) 1. Instead of :Name: you should do something like this Name - or Name: 2. Maybe find a way to show when they are speaking or thinking such as using " " when speaking and { } or ( ) for thinking so that it is easier to tell 3. Try Incorporating more conversation between people, the fights are amazing but the characters feel underdeveloped 4. Have more detail for world building, such as describing the kind of weather (this is more important for battles and such as it can add a certain flair) or how a building or Town looks like (kinda confused as to what his city looks like ;-;) These are just suggestions and it is completely up to you whether to incorporate them or something similar/better. I am sorry if It seems rude and mean, I am just trying to help out an author with great potential :)

5yr

sacredyeti
sacredyetiLv15

This Novel is absolutely amazing i started reading it today and the development is awesome I can not wait for more chapters to come out I HIGHLY recommend this to anyone and everyone. I also think the spelling errors give this story a quality because you can still understand what the author is trying to say. P.S if AUTHORSAMA is reading this I suggest yetitroops XD

5yr
97Alex
97AlexLv14

I'm gonna be honest, the story seems interesting, though it's impossible to read, the writing is done so poorly that i almost deleted it from my library after reading the first few lines, but what made me drop it is the mc. I could get over the horrible writing, i could get over the lack of description of areas, the inconsistency of time while travelling, but man, you have an mc that is a warmongering c*nt, a bastard that can give the order to kill, r*pe and pillage, someone who didn't give a single f*ck when he was talking with a naked woman that just got r*ped, basically my favorite type of mc, and when he is proposed an alliance by marriage, you turn him in a little stuttering and blushing beta b*tch that gets laughed at, thats when it got too much for me, good luck with it.

5yr
Fresh_Linens
Fresh_LinensLv13

My biggest turn off is that the author refuses to use decent grammatical punctuation. I couldn’t make it past the fourth chapter because of it. If your not hung up on grammar and spelling then this MC has some potential.

4yr
Ascathon_Asceron
Ascathon_AsceronLv12

Not worth of time mc is a pure dick like a kid. He wants to wipe a town full of civilians, just because he lost an attack. Also he does not treat his subordinates as human but just a piece on a chess board. Also worst of all it has no harem the author promised someone that it will not have harem damn. The only reason i started reading this is because im a fan of Total war too. But im not here for a maniac character that attacks an enemy without a proper reason at all. Ohh sorry he have a reason it was he wants the town. But he attacked without putting down a table first and discuss what he wants. And thats a big no no!!!

5yr
fhxt
fhxtLv4

Awful grammar, spelling. Wish fulfillment to the max.dont read it,........................... .mm........................................ .......

5yr
synncrytech3
synncrytech3Lv5

Has extremely poor writing, but if the author could just edit his chapters it would make for a good story, probably. -----------------------------------------------

5yr
Nathan_Hinds
Nathan_HindsAuthor

I review my own Work as a 3 star due to its my first time I know i am not Good with Grammar and stuff But i believe the story is good and has many ways to go and the characters are also good some have said the characters need more In-depth actions based on them so i also took that in to account when giving my own review i also took in to account that my way of Point of view is also mostly done from MC point of view so that's also a negative But all in all from a neutral point I would honestly give my own Novel a 3 star maybe 3.5 this is an honest review of a reader not as the author

5yr
Skyhunter1
Skyhunter1Lv12

Most likely a kid that made this and doesn’t really give good land design or good character build, story is really rushed and poor build up everywhere, but the concept of the story is nice but really wish he add more back story or build up around a city not just keep moving along with no build up. hard to imagine the land or anything since the author thinks we already have it pre download but if you want to read a book with poor quality and poor characters design then step right up and read this baby. No hard feeling author just an honest review.

5yr
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