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NoOne_Important_1486
NoOne_Important_1486Lv105yr
2019-12-23 10:59

Shit story. Wants to be luffys twin brother which is a ****ty cliche, And also the story is **** so.... 👌

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Jemena_JejeLv2

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Chaosreigns
ChaosreignsLv4

Are you guys serious ? Who wouldn't want monkey d. Dragon and garp as a backing ?

NoOne_Important_1486
NoOne_Important_1486Lv10

It's not just the twin brother thing it's just the story is **** the system isnt handled great and the guy is an idiot aka the author

Chaosreigns:Are you guys serious ? Who wouldn't want monkey d. Dragon and garp as a backing ?
NoOne_Important_1486
NoOne_Important_1486Lv10

And they dont give you backing at all the literally let you do your own thing and if you get captured you pretty much die so it makes no difference dragons never around and neither is garp and you don't really learn anything from either of them plus luffys twin brother? That screams I'm gonna make this story with potential go down hill immediately because I'm a moron and wish fulfillment

Chaosreigns:Are you guys serious ? Who wouldn't want monkey d. Dragon and garp as a backing ?
DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4

☆ special new year's giveaway ☆ I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read. Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere. You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels. I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time. They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does. Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them. He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave. I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time. That type of MC is cringe a.f. Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list. What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.

NoOne_Important_1486
NoOne_Important_1486Lv10

I'll check it out if you can give me three novels on that list to make sure it's not a scam

DearCompanion: ☆ special new year's giveaway ☆ I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read. Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere. You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels. I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time. They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does. Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them. He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave. I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time. That type of MC is cringe a.f. Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list. What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.
Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5

If I had a chance to go there then I am certainly not interested in them or the straw hats. I wanna make my own crew and climb to the top on my own. That background is useless (Garp didn't even try to save ace).

Chaosreigns:Are you guys serious ? Who wouldn't want monkey d. Dragon and garp as a backing ?
Chado_Sama
Chado_SamaLv5

I would pillage some of his crew and just sweep in after he has trashed everything and left. Luffy just wants to fight and eat meat. Gold and weapons just left behind if he didn't have Nami in his party.

Seikatsu:If I had a chance to go there then I am certainly not interested in them or the straw hats. I wanna make my own crew and climb to the top on my own. That background is useless (Garp didn't even try to save ace).
Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5

What types of things would you wish for?

Chado_Sama:I would pillage some of his crew and just sweep in after he has trashed everything and left. Luffy just wants to fight and eat meat. Gold and weapons just left behind if he didn't have Nami in his party.
Chado_Sama
Chado_SamaLv5

Gold, Devil fruit (defeated enemies), ships, talented people he just helps and then moves on. Luffy's crew could have been twice as big and OP if he wasn't so blasé. But if you were an SI, you would be trying to increase your power without gaining all the enemies.

INFIN1TE
INFIN1TELv3

Now this trash author taking his anger out on my review, without giving any proper reason, if anyone want to talk to him then go to my review he is very active there 😜

INFIN1TE
INFIN1TELv3

Now this trash author taking his anger out on my review, without giving any proper reason, if anyone want to talk to him then go to my review he is very active there 😜

streek135
streek135Lv15

I think all you whiny Lil bi*ch'es are trash I enjoy the story and so do many others and I appreciate how hard it is to write any story so how about instead of being a bunch of toxic crybabies you all go on your marry way and read something else or better yet why don't you try writing something to your ridiculous high standard and see how you fair.

GodOfLight
GodOfLightLv1

Meh alt author account

streek135:I think all you whiny Lil bi*ch'es are trash I enjoy the story and so do many others and I appreciate how hard it is to write any story so how about instead of being a bunch of toxic crybabies you all go on your marry way and read something else or better yet why don't you try writing something to your ridiculous high standard and see how you fair.
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