Item: Master of the Omnitrix
Rating: 5

Kaito_UzumakiLv44yr

2020-10-17 02:19

Love this fic. I will love it even more if you pair Gwen with Ben. I've check it ****** is not wrong(Not!) if your cousins. People do it all the time. It's fune really honest!

Master of the Omnitrix

AmpJ789

4.2

37 Chs

Liked by 37 people

Replies21

EyeballLv1

4yr

Silly_Goose77Lv11

Doo it plz

3yr

GodackLv2

It isn't normal for people with family bonds to have a sexual relationship with eachother no matter where you are... You should just quit with everything you are doing.

3yr

Kaito_UzumakiLv4

It's a Fcking Joke Read what's in the brackets too motherfcka. No selective reading don't you learn that in Elementry school?

Godack:It isn't normal for people with family bonds to have a sexual relationship with eachother no matter where you are... You should just quit with everything you are doing.

3yr

GodackLv2

Hm, not sure... It certainly has been some time since I last went to school.

Kaito_Uzumaki:It's a Fcking Joke Read what's in the brackets too motherfcka. No selective reading don't you learn that in Elementry school?

3yr

Kaito_UzumakiLv4

…… yeah I don't believe that. You sound like a Bookworm know-it-all and Mr. or Ms play-by-rules

Godack:Hm, not sure... It certainly has been some time since I last went to school.

3yr

GodackLv2

Well if I did happen to know everything there is to know I would not have been here wasting both of our time, and what does sounding like how you accuse me of sounding relate to going to school? I am genuinely confused about it. I will stop trying to reply to you as you come over as someone who doesn’t need other people's opinions. Have a nice day and goodbye. -Regards bookworm know-it-all…...

Kaito_Uzumaki:…… yeah I don't believe that. You sound like a Bookworm know-it-all and Mr. or Ms play-by-rules

3yr

ze_roLv11

nope

3yr

Kaito_UzumakiLv4

Thank You glad you understand. I'll live my life the way I want to live and think what I want to think. No goody two shoes can tell me what to do

Godack:Well if I did happen to know everything there is to know I would not have been here wasting both of our time, and what does sounding like how you accuse me of sounding relate to going to school? I am genuinely confused about it. I will stop trying to reply to you as you come over as someone who doesn’t need other people's opinions. Have a nice day and goodbye. -Regards bookworm know-it-all…...

3yr

LucyAlterEgoLv6

Actually this is common and it was even thought from the beginning that they were together since at first Gwen was not going to be his cousin or a blood relative, only the daughter of some family friends who had been commissioned to take care of Uncle Ben So although each had their romantic tense moments, they even remained that way in the script until Ben 10 Universe: 3

3yr

Demiurge_OharaLv11

you sound triggered?

Kaito_Uzumaki:…… yeah I don't believe that. You sound like a Bookworm know-it-all and Mr. or Ms play-by-rules

3yr

Lutheris_rightLv2

Hi there, how's Alabama this time of the year?

3yr

Kaito_UzumakiLv4

where?

Lutheris_right:Hi there, how's Alabama this time of the year?

3yr

ProfessorAkiraLv12

3yr

AverageAidonLv3

Actually, those are not brackets. They are parentheses. Did YOU learn English back in Elementary School?

Kaito_Uzumaki:It's a Fcking Joke Read what's in the brackets too motherfcka. No selective reading don't you learn that in Elementry school?

2yr

Kaito_UzumakiLv4

Bruh where did you pop up. That comment was like 2 years ago

AverageAidon:Actually, those are not brackets. They are parentheses. Did YOU learn English back in Elementary School?

2yr

MightBeGayLv15

Oof, i dunno if this is todays you but this you is kinda cringy bro

Kaito_Uzumaki:Thank You glad you understand. I'll live my life the way I want to live and think what I want to think. No goody two shoes can tell me what to do

2yr

Kaito_UzumakiLv4

The meme your looking for is 'Hello Alabama

MightBeGay:Oof, i dunno if this is todays you but this you is kinda cringy bro
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2yr

Loaded_Demigod29Lv14

Who killed your dog? Why tf do you have to be so rude?

Kaito_Uzumaki:…… yeah I don't believe that. You sound like a Bookworm know-it-all and Mr. or Ms play-by-rules

2yr

Kaito_UzumakiLv4

The Vietnamese Guy next door..

Loaded_Demigod29:Who killed your dog? Why tf do you have to be so rude?

2yr

Other Reviews

DeathlockLv3

What the **** is this ..? Everything is just copy and paste . What is the use of the knowledge of previous world when you do nothing but just fellow the original story . Add "Butterfly" effect, more and something new .

4yr

Red_RomanLv12

What.The.Actual.Fuck is wrong with this novel...I mean it starts off with an interesting premise then with CH8&9 it pisses it away and becomes a less interesting rehash of cannon. It's always sad to see such great potential thrown to the fucking dogs.

4yr

BothstarLv4

hello, i have a request, please add more descriptions to the characters, i guarantee most people don't remember the shapes of the aliens, villains are some minor percentages, except some aliens that never went out of our head eg alien X, four arms, echo echo, chill, good, I hope it meets my request

4yr

MatrixPrimeLv13

AWSOME Story! I hope you can continue, though may I give a suggestion? Try to include more character building. you have tons of fight scenes and decent amount of world building but not enough character building. With this being a fanfic and with a completely different version of ben with some thing similar I think you should add some things to show how different they are. Another thing, With bens upgrades aliens maybe you should add more detail about how they now look when he brings them out and also make the fights for minor and some major villains easier! The last thing is more of a question. will we have Incest? and will we have multiple lovers?(Just 2 - 3 at most)P.S will their be romance?

4yr

illegal_incognitoLv14

it started out good but went downhill soon after, confusing development and the mc aint showing how smart he is or how he controls the the world now, he did not fully unleashed the omnitrix potential and was beaten by his enemies easily, he should be near unstoppable for being a transmigrator and knowing the ben 10 universe

3yr

AmpJ789Author

Yes , I'm shameless and self confident enough to review myself with a high amount of stars for the story. I honestly relieved that everyone likes this story as much as I do and reads it .

4yr

SorriaLv4

The history is amazing, your grammar, not so much. You don't tell us what is happening like: Ben took a shower and told Max he would stay in his lab. No, you should use quotes "" dialogue to tell your readers what is happening like. Ben walked towards the bathroom and opened the door, before entering he turned his head towards his grandpa and said. "Hey grandpa, I'll stay in my lab for the rest of the day after taking a shower." Not only that but you constantly stick words together. And lastly, you change the Pov too much Don't use YOU to refer to a character, I'm not Kevin, I'm not Ben, I'm a reader, stick using. Resuming everything, your history is honestly incredible but the grammar puts much of that down.

3yr

skulputulurubugLv14

Author needs to fix the random first person second person third person pov, you start with I, then go your then go Ben... the intro starts out nice smart athletic mc.. then he made a company with grandpa max and become rich... but stuck to Canon cause he's afraid of the butterfly effect? Should've skipped those if you were sticking to Canon and just described the minor changes he made...

3yr

GodOfLightLv1

Everything is just copy and paste . What is the use of the knowledge of previous world when you do nothing but just fellow the original story . Add "Butterfly" effect, more and something new .

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