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Master of the Omnitrix
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Master of the Omnitrix

AmpJ789

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What is Master of the Omnitrix

Master of the Omnitrix is a popular web novel written by the author AmpJ789, covering BEN 10, THE OMNITRIX, OP-MC, SI, REICARNATION, INCOMPLETE KNOWLEDGE, Sci-fi genres. It's viewed by 947.7K readers with an average rating of 4.19/5 and 20 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 37 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.

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"One of the most powerful beings in all fiction whose only weakness is his mentality and plot. " .... "OK then ...." Ben Tennyson. Ben 10. Holder of the Omnitrix. Earth's Greatest Champion. Hero of Heroes . Saviour of the Universe. I got some big shoes to fill since I am , somehow, in his 5 year old body . ..... The Universe is doomed... isn't it. * First Fanfiction. I just felt I should give it a try. Proper Crictism and writing advice is welcome .

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Kai_Uzumaki
Kai_UzumakiLv3Kai_Uzumaki

Love this fic. I will love it even more if you pair Gwen with Ben. I've check it ****** is not wrong(Not!) if your cousins. People do it all the time. It's fune really honest!

Ujjwal_Pandey
Ujjwal_PandeyLv2Ujjwal_Pandey

What the **** is this ..? Everything is just copy and paste . What is the use of the knowledge of previous world when you do nothing but just fellow the original story . Add "Butterfly" effect, more and something new .

King_Of_Monsters
King_Of_MonstersLv4King_Of_Monsters

AWSOME Story! I hope you can continue, though may I give a suggestion? Try to include more character building. you have tons of fight scenes and decent amount of world building but not enough character building. With this being a fanfic and with a completely different version of ben with some thing similar I think you should add some things to show how different they are. Another thing, With bens upgrades aliens maybe you should add more detail about how they now look when he brings them out and also make the fights for minor and some major villains easier! The last thing is more of a question. will we have Incest? and will we have multiple lovers?(Just 2 - 3 at most)P.S will their be romance?

Bothstar
BothstarLv4Bothstar

hello, i have a request, please add more descriptions to the characters, i guarantee most people don't remember the shapes of the aliens, villains are some minor percentages, except some aliens that never went out of our head eg alien X, four arms, echo echo, chill, good, I hope it meets my request

Kata_Lehloenya
Kata_LehloenyaLv2Kata_Lehloenya

What.The.Actual.Fuck is wrong with this novel...I mean it starts off with an interesting premise then with CH8&9 it pisses it away and becomes a less interesting rehash of cannon. It's always sad to see such great potential thrown to the fucking dogs.

AmpJ789
AmpJ789AuthorAmpJ789

Yes , I'm shameless and self confident enough to review myself with a high amount of stars for the story. I honestly relieved that everyone likes this story as much as I do and reads it .

GrandChase_Fan
GrandChase_FanLv5GrandChase_Fan

I love the story but I'm too lazy to make a genuine review sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Worthless_Writer
Worthless_WriterLv2Worthless_Writer

pretty good just atleast work on some things. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .... . . . .

the_lone_cat
the_lone_catLv2the_lone_cat

Love it. Please continue writing. You're a good author.

_Kaitlin_
_Kaitlin_Lv4_Kaitlin_

Just binge read this entire thing up to this point. It was pretty good. It was a bit stagnant in the middle or so chapters but I read on and was not disappointed. Keep it up!

Joao_Arthur
Joao_ArthurLv6Joao_Arthur

Greatest Ben 10 fanfic you will ever find. The only bad things it has is the occasional grammar mistake and the updates taking a little bit too much to be released. :)

Bananapepper
BananapepperLv1Bananapepper

Reveal spoiler

WolfantChaos
WolfantChaosLv6WolfantChaos

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Kenlinvert1
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STRELOK474
STRELOK474Lv3STRELOK474

Great story!Please continue!....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

NarutoUchiha1777
NarutoUchiha1777Lv3NarutoUchiha1777

It's a great book, I like how the Author doesn't just focus on Ben I also like how the MC fixes things without overthinking it but it goes a bit fast at the beginning maybe the author wants to focus more on alien force or something

vickyAlisa
vickyAlisaLv1vickyAlisa

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GODKINGASH
GODKINGASHLv4GODKINGASH

Looking forward to reading more‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️

VMoto
VMotoLv6VMoto

Love this story. And there's not much like it. ExexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpExp ExexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpExp ExexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpExp ExexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpExp ExexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpExp ExexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpExp ExexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpExp

zang123
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