Loaded_Demigod29

Honestly idk. I was mainly inspired to write this by Stellar Swordmaster, but a adaptation would be too far into the future to consider, plus the story would have to be good enough consistently for me to consider that.

Reading this was like eating a perfectly cooked crincle-cut truffle oil french fry with ranch and cheese dip. In other words, it was great work. You are doing a great job with the characterization and the pacing is good, the descriptions are also pretty good, but it feels more hastily written than some of your other works. Now this just may be due to the nature of how webnovel fanfics are written (uploaded shortly after they are written), but it feels closer to fast food than most of your fics. It’s not necessarily a bad thing though.

Thank you for your praise BRUZZAH

Idk bro, tell me if you figure it out.

Ehh, father is too formal for regular people.

It’s done. Undergoing beta-reading rn. Will be up within an hour.

These are big paras. Break them up more.

The conversation seems more rushed this chapter.

Brooooooo, how do I structure chapter 3! My overthinking has paralyzed meeeeee. There is so much yap. Is yap fine? Argh, the proofreader had to retire from the internet now 😭 Adidjwjxheiachejfir Nah I’d Bochi to Your Name’s Link Click the Summer Hikaru’s Pancreas Fruits Basket with Lie in April Angel Spolies Kusanagi-san’s Confessions The Rock in Darling Dress Up Gojo Sukuna Love and War Lv 999 FFF RANK Skill SSS RANK HUNTER DIFIW DKSOFJEKXJ DKCKE S

I’m writing it rn chief. Got a bit lazy the last couple of days.