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Zoro_r
Zoro_rLv44yr
2020-04-20 16:30

Nice story but author is trying too hard not make OP MC which bugs me the most! As you see MC has natural talent in learning and can use Fujin jutsu but never uses it and while fighting she can use five element jutsu but only uses her MS which makes her blind.... So much for making M.C nerf. It's like author gave most powerful tool to MC but MC never tried to learn or try to gain insight!!! Which frustrates me to no end.

Uchiha's Butterfly

dahnik
4.7
124 Chs

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dahnik
dahnikAuthor

Hmm thanks for your input ;-) I will slowly make her Op in the future couple chapters. I just want her to develop by fighting hard battles ;-)

4yr
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BreezyNovels
BreezyNovelsLv5

Is this Yuri Romance or no? Who is the romance with?

dahnik:Hmm thanks for your input ;-) I will slowly make her Op in the future couple chapters. I just want her to develop by fighting hard battles ;-)
4yr
1
dahnik
dahnikAuthor

just a brief yuri action, newest chapter features Mc's boyfriend ;-)

BreezyNovels:Is this Yuri Romance or no? Who is the romance with?
4yr
Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv10

Thanks, helps me skip this novel then; can't personally stomach novels where female mc has a bf.

dahnik:just a brief yuri action, newest chapter features Mc's boyfriend ;-)
3yr
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