Review Detail of VivitheGreat in Risen World

As a gift to myself for Christmas I have decided to join the shameless sect and give myself five stars. Seriously though I'm just starting out on this story and I'm enjoying writing it and seeing where things take me. Hopefully this helps me improve my skills and I get better the further along I get in the story. There are several things I have in mind for this novel, but I don't want to spoil anything so I'll keep that talk to myself for now. I hope you guys continue to read and support my book. Comments and critiques are welcomed, but try to be nice to each other in the comment section. Oh and yes even you exp. guys are welcome to come if you want. Thank you for your time.