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Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in Locked With The Monster Forever

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kuhaku_soraLv32yrkuhaku_sora

This novel has a rich story! The synopsis alone get draw the readers closer to this book. The only thing that I'd like to point out are some grammatical errors found on the chapters. These includes the passive voice misuse ("We're trying to hit on her" which could be "tried hitting on her") and missing quotation marks on the first few chapters. Besides that, this novel is awesom!

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Locked With The Monster Forever

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I edited those errors long time ago, don't know how you saw them now. Anyway, thnx