It started out pretty good but quickly got to be a little out there, however that wasn't so bad until the author started to break the fourth wall using the book to talk to commenters making it quickly get annoying. So much time is skipped regularly within the same chapter and now he's even sleeping with Pokemon in their regular forms. If I'm going to be reading about a MC who is going to be sleeping with not only his daughter/ soul companion who is a wolf as well as his other pets in the Pokemon world I'd appreciate a little warning considering that's what tags are for such as #Harem, #Incest and #Beastiality. The tags aren't there to allow us to judge the book prematurely, they are there to ensure that the targeted audience finds what they are looking for and to prevent those who don't wish to read certain types of stories from wasting their time with books out of their comfort zone.
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LIKEI'm not someone who really does things in a logical way, time and math aren't really my strong points as one I have to check six times and the other I would sadly just struggle with thinking of a way to fill in those gaps since most people like skipping ahead to the action, limited tag number is a thing for peoples books so all the current tags are the max number, and this is the longest thing I've done in well a while
His Pokemon don't have sexy female forms or is he fuβ¬king ordinary pokemon because that is weird? At least make his companions furry girl version's of the pokemon, his wolf daughter companion too of course. Only mc should have furry girl version's of his pet companions! He should have the power to evolve his pets.
No sexy forms just regular female Pokemon and his daughter is basically a mutant wolf.
SlyImmortalDevil:His Pokemon don't have sexy female forms or is he fuβ¬king ordinary pokemon because that is weird? At least make his companions furry girl version's of the pokemon, his wolf daughter companion too of course. Only mc should have furry girl version's of his pet companions! He should have the power to evolve his pets.
if your mc is screwing its daught you need serious help. i was gonna read but im glad i found that out so i can get you the medical help you need
BiazarKaiser:I'm not someone who really does things in a logical way, time and math aren't really my strong points as one I have to check six times and the other I would sadly just struggle with thinking of a way to fill in those gaps since most people like skipping ahead to the action, limited tag number is a thing for peoples books so all the current tags are the max number, and this is the longest thing I've done in well a while