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the author is out of ideas
now i am starting to think that the author is fan of boku no piko
i would really like to se him tortured by voldylocks
a disappointment
The novel started with a genuinely strong premise — a protagonist who wanted to rise above everyone and become a true game changer in the Suits universe. But as the story progressed, it became repetitive and morally inconsistent. Every character eventually repeats the same patterns: Donna defending Harvey or the firm, people comparing Scott to Harvey, and Scott constantly saying “I’m not Harvey.” After a while, the dialogue starts feeling recycled instead of natural. The biggest issue, though, is how the story frames Scott as principled while ignoring when he is clearly wrong. Daniel Hardman planning a hostile takeover against Pearson Hardman was not some unforgivable evil move — it was business. Scott working from the inside against the man employing him was the actual betrayal. Jessica already threw him aside when it suited her, yet because Louis and a few associates were kind to him, he suddenly becomes ready to sacrifice himself for everyone. The novel treats this as noble, but honestly, it just makes him look irrational and hypocritical rather than intelligent. And then there’s the System itself. What is even the real purpose of it? Most of the time it only gives probability percentages and obvious behavioral analysis — something any genuinely high-IQ strategist in the story should already be capable of calculating on their own. Instead of feeling like an essential mechanic, the System often feels like a narrative shortcut used to artificially make Scott appear smarter than everyone else. At times, it honestly comes across more as reader clickbait than a meaningful part of the story.
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