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Nimero
NimeroAuthor5yr
2019-12-27 19:12

Hey guys, I just realized the first review of my novel that I personally and shamelessly made was all in caps. Anyway, as you can see, this a new novel I am working on.

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Melshan
MelshanLv7

The MC Will have a girlfriend or Harém?

Nimero
NimeroAuthor

Hmm, stick around and you’ll find out.🤔

Chaos_Prime
Chaos_PrimeLv15

Can u tell me if it’s a harem or not because tbh I don’t like harem so I don’t wanna get hyped on the story for it to be ruined by harem

Nimero:Hmm, stick around and you’ll find out.🤔
Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4

Author san kindly tell if it's a harem or not. Coz making a clan without having wives is kinda not fitting the title. This is the only thing holding me to read the novel other than stockpiling of chapters. Kindly mention the tag of harem or no harem so viewers have a clear idea.....

Nimero:Hmm, stick around and you’ll find out.🤔
Nimero
NimeroAuthor

I understand your frustration, but the reason I didn’t put the harem tag or not in the novel was because I feel like I didn’t need to at the moment. Also, i didn’t want to force anything and let the story progress. Like you said , making a clan without having wives is kinda not fitting the title. However, the Mc isn’t the only one that will be in the clan. I know I didn’t exactly answer your question but that’s the only thing I can tell you right now.

Nikhil_Chand:Author san kindly tell if it's a harem or not. Coz making a clan without having wives is kinda not fitting the title. This is the only thing holding me to read the novel other than stockpiling of chapters. Kindly mention the tag of harem or no harem so viewers have a clear idea.....
Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4

I totally understand coz forcing things can only ruin things and you have your own idea how to go about the story. Also reading title and synopsis MC should be the head of the clan and patriarch with wives is .... Hehehe it again comes down to same thing. Well I will then wait for couple hundred more chapters so that things will become more clear by chapter 500. I guess by then you can reveal itm Thanks for the reply.....

Nimero:I understand your frustration, but the reason I didn’t put the harem tag or not in the novel was because I feel like I didn’t need to at the moment. Also, i didn’t want to force anything and let the story progress. Like you said , making a clan without having wives is kinda not fitting the title. However, the Mc isn’t the only one that will be in the clan. I know I didn’t exactly answer your question but that’s the only thing I can tell you right now.
Arun_Kumar_7255
Arun_Kumar_7255Lv4

Will you continue purple lighting emperor aurthor sir

Crimson_Assassin
Crimson_AssassinLv12

That’s fucking dumb

Nimero:I understand your frustration, but the reason I didn’t put the harem tag or not in the novel was because I feel like I didn’t need to at the moment. Also, i didn’t want to force anything and let the story progress. Like you said , making a clan without having wives is kinda not fitting the title. However, the Mc isn’t the only one that will be in the clan. I know I didn’t exactly answer your question but that’s the only thing I can tell you right now.
J_S_2998
J_S_2998Lv13

I can appreciate your approach with not wanting to force things in the story. I love romance in a story and think it adds a lot of depth to make a story go from good to great. Harems can be excellent if done well, with polygamy, and actually give relationship development between the MC and each girl where they all end up married to the MC. It’s no good when you have so many women that like the MC and he has good relationships with all of them but then either picks none of them or only one. If the MC were to marry all of them then no one gets left out and readers are also able to enjoy multiple satisfying romantic relationships, and have their favorite girls win without having to worry about them being sad due to rejection, etc. So thank you for taking all of that into consideration and I look forward to seeing how the MC develops his relationships. I hope he ends up with many good wives who are able to make a big family with him and live happily ever after together. Keep up the good work author!

Nimero:I understand your frustration, but the reason I didn’t put the harem tag or not in the novel was because I feel like I didn’t need to at the moment. Also, i didn’t want to force anything and let the story progress. Like you said , making a clan without having wives is kinda not fitting the title. However, the Mc isn’t the only one that will be in the clan. I know I didn’t exactly answer your question but that’s the only thing I can tell you right now.
Johnurfriend
JohnurfriendLv10

Lol

XyrusCreed
XyrusCreedLv14

so I'm assuming the concept of jealousy doesn't exist in the harem novels you like to read

J_S_2998:I can appreciate your approach with not wanting to force things in the story. I love romance in a story and think it adds a lot of depth to make a story go from good to great. Harems can be excellent if done well, with polygamy, and actually give relationship development between the MC and each girl where they all end up married to the MC. It’s no good when you have so many women that like the MC and he has good relationships with all of them but then either picks none of them or only one. If the MC were to marry all of them then no one gets left out and readers are also able to enjoy multiple satisfying romantic relationships, and have their favorite girls win without having to worry about them being sad due to rejection, etc. So thank you for taking all of that into consideration and I look forward to seeing how the MC develops his relationships. I hope he ends up with many good wives who are able to make a big family with him and live happily ever after together. Keep up the good work author!
LazyCloudBC
LazyCloudBCLv3

What age is the main character right now on the lastest chapter???

Nimero
NimeroAuthor

15

LazyCloudBC:What age is the main character right now on the lastest chapter???
LazyCloudBC
LazyCloudBCLv3

THanks

Nimero:15
LazyCloudBC
LazyCloudBCLv3

Will there be any forms of romance?

Nimero:15
Stuffedcrow
StuffedcrowLv14

I will check out the book once I know if its harem or not. looks interesting but I won't read novels till I know what to expect love life wise and not ntr

Thefatkid
ThefatkidLv13

Now i can get behind this

J_S_2998:I can appreciate your approach with not wanting to force things in the story. I love romance in a story and think it adds a lot of depth to make a story go from good to great. Harems can be excellent if done well, with polygamy, and actually give relationship development between the MC and each girl where they all end up married to the MC. It’s no good when you have so many women that like the MC and he has good relationships with all of them but then either picks none of them or only one. If the MC were to marry all of them then no one gets left out and readers are also able to enjoy multiple satisfying romantic relationships, and have their favorite girls win without having to worry about them being sad due to rejection, etc. So thank you for taking all of that into consideration and I look forward to seeing how the MC develops his relationships. I hope he ends up with many good wives who are able to make a big family with him and live happily ever after together. Keep up the good work author!
Sin_Kinghad
Sin_KinghadLv11

this is better than before

ptrage
ptrageLv5

Interesting, tbh i don't mind it's harem or not as long as it's well written not like randomly meet girls after short conversation or scene then they just suddenly fall in love. Especially when they have to put unnecessary conflict for each future harem to the point it becomes toxic. There's always the MC alone will save the day when trouble comes. And the most annoying part is author keeps making their cultivation on par with MC easily with their magical fortunes, divine body or whatever for no reason while MC have to put his life in dead or alive situation MANY TIMES. Well, it's the time i know either i drop it or skim it really hard because there's no point to read it carefully since at the end of the day all the efforts and process will be meaningless.

Equinox_D
Equinox_DLv14

Will there be R-18??

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slothyhuman
slothyhumanLv12

Im genuinely convinced everyone who reviews and comments on these stories are bots. The world development is bad. The author throws at ranks, names and areas without telling us anything about what they mean and if he does the meanings he gives are things you could tell from a educated guess. " its big" "because they're evil and not righteous". I havent gotten far enough to see much character design vecause i stopped at chapter three. But even then it was so bad, it wasnt like they were people or characters, more like the authors inner concersation with himself, and i didnt even mention yet it seems like when the characters do speak its just them talking about how great their sect is. How great their cultivation is, etc. And thats not even the worst part. The grammar is horrendous. The first chapter wasnt bad but was annoying to read. The second chapter was worse but you could still read it. The third chapter however? Just in the first quarter i pointed out around 10+ errors. I gave up at that point bc i would never finish the chapter of i kept going. So im just going to end it here. I wrote this so someone else hopefully doesnt get tricked by the false reviews that say the story is amazing with nothing wrong with it. Knowing webnovel my review might be pushed down so no one sees it or even removed. But to those who do see and read it. If you can stand a horribly written story that seems to be a translation(not sure about it yet) then go for it. If your not, and your like me. You could check it out but i wouldnt reccomend it, unless by the time you read this the author gets a proof reader and someone to fix all the errors that plague the chapters.

ThomasEdison
ThomasEdisonLv1

I am compelled to write this review because most of the reviews given for this novel are MISLEADING, MISINFORMING, and straight up LIE. The novel has no class, bad story development, bad character development, bad world development. I mean if you want to read, then sure but after 20-50 chapters you will come on your own and READ my review AGAIN. Lets talk about: 1)Writing Quality:- Quality of writing is not bad, apart from some grammatical mistakes, I don't see anything that can be considered 'mood-destroying'. 2)Story Development:- I know this is a cultivation/fantasy novel where MC is born OP. From the 1st chapter author starts describing characters that are heaven defying and renown across entire regions, but by the end of 10th chapter, all of those characters are shivering, wetting themselves and shivering when anything happens. The author doesnt have a proper scale for distinguishing between different levels of power, renown, strength etc. I know that author needs stronger villain to keep the story going but the novel feels like a summary version of a really bad cultivation novel. 3) Nomenclature:- The author is using some kind random name generator for naming everything. If he is naming sect, then he will generate 4 names, add all of them together and add sect at the end, eg: 'Saint Tiger Demon Beast Clan', this is a sect/clan in the novel. And this random name generator is used for naming of cities, regions, weapon class, cultivation class, and everything that exists in the novel apart from Names of humans. 3)Character design/development: Just sad. There is no development for other characters. If you are not a family of MC, you will not progress at all. Only MC & his family are allowed to progress. And I don't want to reveal anything but the MC has not aged one bit from 1st chapter till 150th chapter and he has gone from medium-strong in his own sect to strongest in entire continent. IN 1 YEAR. Author doesnt have any grasp of the TIME. 4) World design: Usually any good novel writer will work on the concept, character and the novel setting and much more before starting to write the novel, but our AUTHOR is winging it, I will give you an example: 1st to 10th chapter: MC stronger then 90% of his sect. now author needs a villain, bring top dog of his sect and make them fight. after winning MC stronger then everyone. so now author is in need of another stronger villain, lets make a new sect/empire, make an arrogant character of that empire who is more powerful then MC and have them bully the sect or target MC so MC will go and fight and while fighting will become as powerful as the character and win. Now author needs another sect/empire, AND SO THE CYCLE CONTINUES. The novel is written by a CHILD of age no more then 15. Or by a guy who couldn't mature past his adolescence. And it angers me that so many bots were used to give higher rating.

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