Hey guys, I just realized the first review of my novel that I personally and shamelessly made was all in caps. Anyway, as you can see, this a new novel I am working on.

Im genuinely convinced everyone who reviews and comments on these stories are bots. The world development is bad. The author throws at ranks, names and areas without telling us anything about what they mean and if he does the meanings he gives are things you could tell from a educated guess. " its big" "because they're evil and not righteous". I havent gotten far enough to see much character design vecause i stopped at chapter three. But even then it was so bad, it wasnt like they were people or characters, more like the authors inner concersation with himself, and i didnt even mention yet it seems like when the characters do speak its just them talking about how great their sect is. How great their cultivation is, etc. And thats not even the worst part. The grammar is horrendous. The first chapter wasnt bad but was annoying to read. The second chapter was worse but you could still read it. The third chapter however? Just in the first quarter i pointed out around 10+ errors. I gave up at that point bc i would never finish the chapter of i kept going. So im just going to end it here. I wrote this so someone else hopefully doesnt get tricked by the false reviews that say the story is amazing with nothing wrong with it. Knowing webnovel my review might be pushed down so no one sees it or even removed. But to those who do see and read it. If you can stand a horribly written story that seems to be a translation(not sure about it yet) then go for it. If your not, and your like me. You could check it out but i wouldnt reccomend it, unless by the time you read this the author gets a proof reader and someone to fix all the errors that plague the chapters.

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I am compelled to write this review because most of the reviews given for this novel are MISLEADING, MISINFORMING, and straight up LIE. The novel has no class, bad story development, bad character development, bad world development. I mean if you want to read, then sure but after 20-50 chapters you will come on your own and READ my review AGAIN. Lets talk about: 1)Writing Quality:- Quality of writing is not bad, apart from some grammatical mistakes, I don't see anything that can be considered 'mood-destroying'. 2)Story Development:- I know this is a cultivation/fantasy novel where MC is born OP. From the 1st chapter author starts describing characters that are heaven defying and renown across entire regions, but by the end of 10th chapter, all of those characters are shivering, wetting themselves and shivering when anything happens. The author doesnt have a proper scale for distinguishing between different levels of power, renown, strength etc. I know that author needs stronger villain to keep the story going but the novel feels like a summary version of a really bad cultivation novel. 3) Nomenclature:- The author is using some kind random name generator for naming everything. If he is naming sect, then he will generate 4 names, add all of them together and add sect at the end, eg: 'Saint Tiger Demon Beast Clan', this is a sect/clan in the novel. And this random name generator is used for naming of cities, regions, weapon class, cultivation class, and everything that exists in the novel apart from Names of humans. 3)Character design/development: Just sad. There is no development for other characters. If you are not a family of MC, you will not progress at all. Only MC & his family are allowed to progress. And I don't want to reveal anything but the MC has not aged one bit from 1st chapter till 150th chapter and he has gone from medium-strong in his own sect to strongest in entire continent. IN 1 YEAR. Author doesnt have any grasp of the TIME. 4) World design: Usually any good novel writer will work on the concept, character and the novel setting and much more before starting to write the novel, but our AUTHOR is winging it, I will give you an example: 1st to 10th chapter: MC stronger then 90% of his sect. now author needs a villain, bring top dog of his sect and make them fight. after winning MC stronger then everyone. so now author is in need of another stronger villain, lets make a new sect/empire, make an arrogant character of that empire who is more powerful then MC and have them bully the sect or target MC so MC will go and fight and while fighting will become as powerful as the character and win. Now author needs another sect/empire, AND SO THE CYCLE CONTINUES. The novel is written by a CHILD of age no more then 15. Or by a guy who couldn't mature past his adolescence. And it angers me that so many bots were used to give higher rating.

This book is one of the best am reading currently, nice world development....amazing MC for a ten year old...looking forward to more chapter and hope for a faster release

i liked this novel alot. nowadays there are not many authors who write ruthless and cold MC's. everyone is trying to create a hero or a heaven's favorite. personally i like aloof, cold and decisive MC's much more. his innate abilities and powers are also interesting. the world building is like any other cultivation world where there are rankings of sects, kingdoms and also even higher level of powerful beings than normal people knows. the only thing i dont like is the huge fillers everywhere. even if two people are talking, you will find two three paragraphs of fillers/explanations for every sentence they speak. alot of filler in between conversations. in full whole chapters two persons will only speak two lines while anything else will be filler explanation. 🤦‍♂️. thats why 4.8....for writing its 4 for everything else its 5 stars.

From what I can see, the novel is great! Everything is perfect, and the plot is interesting. To people who are either hesitating to read this novel, I suggest that you give it a go first before deciding since you never know what surprises this book can give you.

Like many before me, this author is shamelessly reviewing his own work. The story isn't perfect and it isn't boring either. Like many xanxia or eastern fantasy novels, you might find some cliche here and there or mistakes. Anyway, give it a try and you might end up liking it.

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