First of all, the world building and the immersion this novel could give you is incredible. You won't find too many novels like this in that regard. Now, this novel had a good start, everything did make sense in some ways. You started to see a world fill of possibilities that MC could explore anytime. But it all goes to waste due to our MC personality, and I'm not talking about his character development (which mindset in the early novel may be displeasing to many, as he was realistically close to a normal guy from earth being throwed in a hostile world) MC drown in *** since early chapters to somehow escape his own problems, he raped, forced and many others nasty things to his own harem. His train of thought is inconsistent. I couldn't read the entirety of chapter 38 due to the amount of displeasure and disgust it has given me, and before making this review I have seen some others in other sites where this novel is also posted and let me tell this that this novel goes worse on it. Ciel is a pedophile for example, the *** scenes is just take more and more of the chapters content, MC doesn't growth in his mindset as many indicated the same problem as me, that he just became too realiable to his own harem. And for those that are wondering how is his harem working, Hana, one of his former slaves, is the one taking the role of male with most girls. Basically our MC had some cuck fetish that turned him up when he sees his girl being taken care off by his other girls. He forced many that didn't swing in that way, to do it with Hana and Roxanne just to satisfy his desire. He's disgusting. Overall, the story would have been much better if there was another main character showing us the world and developing the story without being a Fuckfest of fetish and debauchery.
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LIKEI don't know if the author would come here to tell me that he didn't forced his girls. Manipulation them to do such things is forcing it. If you have written his character like this, just accept that his actions aren't something that any normal and sane person would do. There's nothing wrong with having a character that doesn't follow the "good person" path, since he's just selfish and wicked. It would have been better if you put a warning to prevent people immersing in the novel hoping to a good nature MC, since this novel clearly doesn't have one.
Big lie, HE NEVER RAPED OR FORCED ANYONE TO DO ANYTHING WITHOUT THEIR CONSENT. Show me ONE scene where he FORCES someone to do something. None of the girls ever complained about fulfilling his sexual fantasies or anything like that, only about the bantering, and he respected their wishes. Have they ever said "no, I don't want it," or "no, stop it"? They haven't. Since they don't tell him to stop, he doesn't and push them further. You can't *force* someone to become gay, you can help them open their mind, but these things aren't anywhere near as malleable the way you're thinking they are. - MC *does* change, just keep in mind the slow pace of the story, which means that any realistic change will take *time* to happen. Nothing is instant. - Your complaints about Hana shows a bigoted view against female characters and some ignorance against group marriages. Surprise, when you marry more than one woman, and they're bisexual, they might develop feelings for each other. If you think that makes him a *cuck*, you have some very bigoted and patriarchal way of thinking that's really disgusting. Hana can't even act domineering in bed once in a while and suddenly he's a cuck? - Can't even have some teamwork and people rely on one another and now he's "too reliable on his own harem." Well, yes? Isn't that the *point* of a spouse? To have someone you can rely one. Not to mention they're a fellowship, a group who *kills monsters* now can't have tight bonds to one another and rely on each other for moral, mental, and physical support? - Honestly, I don't like saying this word because of how the well has been poisoned, but your views are very ***ist and patronizing.
I saw more of the review saying that he manipulates them to that, if it's true ... So it's forced.
"""""""Forced""""""" as in: "Wolf: you two like each other?" "Ciel: I guess" "Wolf: ok, how about you two kiss?" "Ciel: ok"
