Item: Saving The Future
Rating: 5
Author: Etiger789

Etiger789Lv155yr

2019-12-09 01:12

What you have so far is absolutely amazing. I cant find any fault besides the names which are hard to remember. THE story is emersive but not in your face that your filled and overwhelmed with to much information. The side charachter loki juno is actually funn and has personality. It's good so far plus it's actually a book I like and don't want to role my eyes at how stupid the plot is. Definitely don't drop this.

Saving The Future

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MisterImmortalAuthor

I know man, that's why I mostly try not to bring too many Indian names in one chapter as that would make it hard to understand what's going on.

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MisterImmortalAuthor

Btw thank you for the review.

5yr

Etiger789Lv15

No need for thanks. Just writing my honest opinion.

MisterImmortal:Btw thank you for the review.

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