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Cynk_Napp
Cynk_NappLv55yr
2019-11-25 01:16

An action packed setup for the four chapters published. Chaotic origin with bad guys showing up (decent forecasting in preceding chapters). Fits a Warfare SciFi-Adventure genre. Writing is easy to read.

Saving The Future

MisterImmortal
4.7
58 Chs

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MisterImmortal
MisterImmortalAuthor

Thanks you for your kind words fellow human.

5yr
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MisterImmortal
MisterImmortalAuthor

I think it's alright if I rate my novel 5 stars right? After all what mother would hate her own baby. All I wanna say is, thank you for reading my novel. Please leave a review if you liked it. Have a wonderful day.

5yr

Alien_Space_Bat
Alien_Space_BatLv5

Very few originals are found in webnovel which are based on the Indian culture, And i think this novel is one of the best among them even if the novel isn't progressed much, the starting and world background coupled with characters making the novel very promising. Author please continue this novel okay🙏 since very few Indian culture based novels are this much promising.

5yr
Etiger789
Etiger789Lv15

What you have so far is absolutely amazing. I cant find any fault besides the names which are hard to remember. THE story is emersive but not in your face that your filled and overwhelmed with to much information. The side charachter loki juno is actually funn and has personality. It's good so far plus it's actually a book I like and don't want to role my eyes at how stupid the plot is. Definitely don't drop this.

5yr
Santeren
SanterenLv15

A book with good potential.Not too bad pretty good for the author and readers that his english isnt too bad.overall this is a pretty decent book.word of advice for the author take in constructive criticism leave out all the haters.

5yr
SleepWalkingMan
SleepWalkingManLv5

A very unique concept instead of usual mc getting killed by a ' truck- kun ' scenario..I'm just fed up of those now...let's talk about this story , the world background and the characterisation of the entities feels new and fresh to me ..so I would recommend any new readers to give it a try as in my opinion you won't reget it.........

5yr
dukroger
dukrogerLv6

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ItachiKIRA
ItachiKIRALv4

What would you get if you combine saiki kusuo's abilities + Reincarnation + Indian Iron age history + kingdom building = an amazingly entertaining and interesting story. Honestly I learned a lot about history and sometimes about science. A good plot and fine narration. A true hidden gem.

5yr
00Zero
00ZeroLv14

I know this story is still early on, but absolutely amazing so far. I’m looking forward to more from this author. Definitely a hidden gem and Thanks for the great story

5yr
cherrythefake
cherrythefakeLv2

Nice science related stuff, you said that It will have Kingdom building and I love Kingdom building genre but I also hope that you will not stop including Sci-fi stuff and consideration that the MC is from an advanced civilization it must be easy for him to make revolutionary tech in 300BC

5yr
ScrapMetal
ScrapMetalLv3

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