Review Detail of ProudMonkey in Child of Destiny

Good story but while is Shin a little weak. He got train by a mafia who got destory by the special force. So when Shin enter the games should he appy them like when he fight...etc.

Thanks for the comment. He is still a beginner in the game, so he doesn't discovered a lot about it. Just wait for him explore more about it.

Harem or no?

Shin will rrally not be with his big sis?

Only one real problem And that is the 4th wall breaks that you have it would be one thing if you had a dead pool type story or character that was similar but you don't so all it does is break immersion

Are you one of those who delete bad reviews?

Nah! I let it as it is. I know that I have some shortcomings and I don't deny it. I'm quite new in this industry after all. So just say what you want. And I will accept it fully.

Sooo I like the story but if I’m to give my score then you would go really low in the grammar department. The other thing is did he modify his character when he enters the game or does he look like he did. Is it even possible to modify it. Is there no penalty for dying or for attacking/pk-ing? That’s for now but I like the story so far.

I admit that I'm quite weak in terms of grammar. And the MC didn't modify his character, same goes for others. All they did is to get an IGN and select a race. The rest will be set as it is. Each race have different starting stats and he happened to fell in Human Race starting point. And there is a penalty for dying and attacking, its just that I didn't give an emphasis into it and just give a slight explanation in previous chaps. As for the MC, he didn't get any penalties from attacking others because of the special effect of his mask. That's all and thanks.

I admit that I'm quite weak in terms of grammar. And the MC didn't modify his character, same goes for others. All they did is to get an IGN and select a race. The rest will be set as it is. Each race have different starting stats and he happened to fell in Human Race starting point. And there is a penalty for dying and attacking, its just that I didn't give an emphasis into it and just give a slight explanation in previous chaps. As for the MC, he didn't get any penalties from attacking others because of the special effect of his mask. That's all and thanks.

ProudMonkey, can you tell me what the tragedy tag is for?

I guess I can't. Sorry

Im starting to read now, i hope it doesnt disappoint because i loveee novels about video-games/vrmmorpg! I just hope he isnt weak ;_;

Sweet Home Alabama! xD jokes

grammar is really bad, its a little better than mtl, since the words are correct, there is just alot missing in between. you can still read it, but its not exactly pleasant

after writing this, i read your comment, which is alot better compared to the actual chapters, potentially do a revisits/potential editor?

Yo author your summary is filled with bad grammar. I am guessing the story is the same. Get an editor.

Is the Tragedy here strong (Death of Familie/Lover/Friends) has the Novel Harem?

hey bro you really should get an editor who will fix up your grammar the story interesting so far an i see you get a good amount of view but there would probably be a lot more people who would read this if you tidied up the grammar a bit

I like the story or novel so far. I would like to keep reading this of at least a thousand chapters not sure what your plans are for the novel. Keep on making the story. Just don’t quit on the story.