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UmbraHaven

UmbraHaven

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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven19d
    Commented

    Honestly, the fake harem vibes are kinda disappointing .

    Ch 139 Us 3 Why?!
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    The Transmigrated Author
    Fantasy · zowji
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven2mth
    Commented

    is this actually no-harem?

    Ch 29 Aftermath
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    An Unordinary Extra
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven5mth
    Commented

    shouldn't kondo recognize Equinox?

    Ch 1740 Nether Visits III
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    Omega Summoner
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven6mth
    Commented

    I'd imagine "Incarnation" would work better than reincarnation

    Description: The Hell Storm Homunculus has rebelled and absorbed the boss of the Hell Storm Paradise dungeon and evolved into a being that transcends both. It is a powerful monster that can control the stormy weather itself and is said to bring salvation or calamity on a whim. It has a personality that looks down on others and treats itself as if it is the reincarnation of the storms.
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    Omega Summoner
    Games · XiaoKongxu
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven6mth
    Replied to MrDegenerate

    Meh, so far fooled 3 gods thinking he's the son of hephaestus. (Can't quite blame them considering blacksmith powers, red hair, and etc.)

    Shirou did not explicitly reveal anything, as he was a terrible liar, but he simply showed his worth and let others come to their own conclusion.
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    Fate Grand Dungeon
    Anime & Comics · Parcasious
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven8mth
    Commented

    ngl was hoping it would be monogamy

    Ch 12 Father and Son duo
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    Naruto: A Real Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · Del123
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven8mth
    Replied to Detective_Raven

    Because there's a higher ratio of male shinobi compared to female shinobi, hence when there's war expect a lot of widows.

    Because of the shinobi thing, women outnumbered men in the village by quite a bit. So it wouldn't be too crazy to marry more than one person. Especially clan heads but for some reason, every major clan head has only had one wife.
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    Naruto: A Real Shinobi
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven9mth
    Replied to Daoofholes6969

    Idk even more templates just ruin the story, especially when you consider how op "captain yamamoto" is. He could effectively solo the whole narutoverse.

    Hello all. I finally have somewhat of a plan for how I want this story to end. It's still a work in progress though, as I've already scrapped a few ideas. There will be more action next chapter. Ayame getting attacked might be kind of random, so I'll explain my thought process. Basically, Kakuzu is always looking for bounties to collect, and he just so happens to see that there's a new bounty to collect in Konoha. Which happens to be Kaen's bounty. That's my reason for Kakuzu being in the Land of Fire. Hidan was somewhere nearby, but with Kakuzu's personality, I can't imagine that they spend all their time together. I just wanted to add it so Kaen would have more reason to hunt down the Akatsuki and change canon some more. That's pretty much it. Leave a review!
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    Naruto: Reduce All Creation to Ash
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven10mth
    Commented

    I just realized he could just leak the location of Jacques to the white fang, and let it be a done deal.

    Ch 10 Chapter 10
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    Another Schnee on Remnant
    Anime & Comics · Arokey
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven10mth
    Commented

    Please tell me if it's harem or no-harem. Also ngl I don't quite like the coupling of whitney, as she doesn't quite mesh well with the mc as she's more or less quite boisterous.

    Ch 29 C029 - Wrapping up the first day in Goldenrod City
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    Pokemon: A life worth living
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven10mth
    Replied to LordPocky

    At that point, that's so much filler even if you count out a few of the dates. Harems, just don't mesh out well if you don't plan it throughly unless you're more in for the fanservice rather than the story.

    Ch 30 That's Why I Hate Humans
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    Fairy Tail: Metal and Threads
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven11mth
    Replied to SixthSense1029

    I mean it's fine as a kids first love, but it just doesn't feel right as a harem type of story.

    'I'm sorry, Lici.' Cana thought to herself. 'I know you like him, too. But I'm gonna take Fonzie for myself.'
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    Fairy Tail: Metal and Threads
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven11mth
    Replied to Morning_Star666

    Probably not a common surname, but they don't know that shin is the progeny of adam and eve hence they're grasping for the slight connection. ( I don't remember if his parents changed their surname, but even then, they only know them by their original surname as they've gone into hiding since.)

    At that time, when that individual just stepped on the Void Manifestation Stage, faced the experts that were already at the peak of the Domain Realm without showing any hint of fear.
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    Child of Destiny
    Games · ProudMonkey
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven1yr
    Replied to RexHarris

    So Diego currently has the Mera Mera no Mi(Flame Flame) Fruit, hence the same reaction from the anime where Flame and Smoke nullify each other. Also I believe he(MC/Smoker) gotten Haki during the Gekko Moria battle, unless I misremember it's also possible that he gained during the 2 year time skip after he defested Gekko Moria.

    He was blasted up high in the air by the heavy impact of Smoker's punch.
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    One Piece: White Hunter
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven1yr
    Posted

    The story is extremely slow and has little to show in terms of development.

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    Isekai Journey Of The Magic Archer
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven1yr
    Replied to Reginald_The_Duck

    I'm assuming whatever creation does in Chinese novels. Just an downgraded name to sound less op.

    Ch 248 At last, A Sorcerer
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    Idle Mage: Humanity's Strongest Backer
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven1yr
    Replied to Ballad

    Have you ever seen the DCAU, then maybe you'll have second thoughts.

    To summarize, Batman and Wonder Woman is infinitely better than Superman and Wonder Woman.
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    DC: Sunspot
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven1yr
    Replied to Might_Cho

    Unless he can absorb or take away heat/energy, the application to create cold is going be hard as cold is basically just the absence of heat/energy.

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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven1yr
    Commented

    Honestly can't really find yuuichi finding another girl unless plot is forced upon him.

    Ch 4 6 Years Old
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    As Buddha in MHA
    Anime & Comics · RubberPeen
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  • UmbraHaven
    UmbraHaven1yr
    Commented

    To be fair younger brothers in stories are a Hella lot rarer, and seems like a good chance of pace.

    Ch 28 28-Good News
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    Lightning Human in MHA
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