Dis77

This book is so bland. Like no personality whatsoever and a boring character to focus on. I was excited to think it was a fanfic of the house with a new character but you instead focus on some old man protecting his wine fields. No real progression can be made. So boring!!!!

Only thing I can see really derailing his career is if a top team like Lakers land someone like Jason Kid or Tim Duncan (both players were keen to leave their teams in the 2000s and almost did). There's also the Piston's cornerstones like Rasheed and Chauncey who are nice pick ups as well.

skip nationalism please. it's embarrassing to claim to be number 1 in a fictional world

honestly can't get over the fact author change the ages of characters and adding additional siblings that didn't exist in hp cannon. otherwise it's decent.

Dumbledore is evil though

it's not about being the same it's about respecting certain characters of the original. It's like going to DBZ world and stealing the dragon balls so Goku can't be resurrected. Dude is a murder hobo stealing all the power ups of others that I would regard the dude as a villain. I was hoping for more original ideas that follow the spirit of the original which is a coming of age adventure series.

danzo: taboo you say?

isn't there that Naruto movie uchiha clone? shin or something? maybe time travel to get the others? meet Sasuke daughter for the last (seven) or danzo?

Might as well make the MC a mute since the dude doesn't seem to care about talking to anyone and just kill them.

Of fucking course. Not gonna even hide MC is overpowered and genius at all things huh?