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joseph_benjamin
joseph_benjaminLv23yr
2021-04-15 15:28

i just want start that i have no idea about stability of updates(i just idk) and the writing quality is ok so {three star} for both of them, also i am just at chapter 33 so idk what happens at ex:page 114 or something happens idk what it is,i am just at page 33. let's start with world background,as far chapter 33, world building is just second coming of gluttony but watered down,it fantasy world with levels, that it really it and the levels do not made a difference,MC just one to two shot everything so why? have it at all? to be honest with you. i thought the world would be like idk a woods with fog and it night time all around at the start, and when the MC show to a town it just reveals to generic fantasy,what if? instead of fantasy it dark fantasy with horror, like the town is silent hill but in a fantasy setting and everyone is off, for word background {two star} for being second coming of gluttony but less interesting thing in the world far as story goes,MC get op almost at the start,then kill everything and get all the women in 30 feet radius of him,that it, very early on the MC get out as a demon two times but nothing happens,MC just run out town,no one comes get him,no wanted posters,nothing happens with it, might as well not have happened in the first,which is a problem that comes up over and over again,the MC can do the worst thing possible and nothing bad will ever come to him at all.{one star} character are just a mess,every one but MC and his women he simp to are just forgettable and bland,so to is the MC, but the MC is well the MC so you can some what remember him a little bit( i say that but i forgot his name lol )if you cut 60 to 70% of the character,the story well mostly stay the same,most character are just there to die,that it. for the MC idk what his deal is, he just kill anything, that not personality, that a hobby,he and female lead hate each other very much but for no reason at all?!?! that do 180 and love each other?!?!?!(one star) WQ:3 SOU:3 SD:1 CD:1 WB:2 the total score is 2.0 but maybe a 2.3 or2.4

Blood demon leveling

zad1333
4.3
210 Chs

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MILARCH
MILARCHLv13

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joseph_benjamin
joseph_benjaminLv2

thanks

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OVERKILL
OVERKILLLv14

no matter how bad a novel is you will find 5 stars reviews with full of passion

3yr
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Lotion_99
Lotion_99Lv1

yup just read it and its terrible dont even get me started on the "romance" which is beyond forced.. No one does anything to the dude in which was literally possessed by a demon and indiscriminately painted the town red. Ive realized this site has sooo many things that are bad but have 4+ star reviews its because of the bots

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It will look better if you change the cover of the story. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🍔🍟

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Deus_Mundum
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Is it just me or are people overly positive about this novel . The mc is just going along with how the story is taking him .He is making any about how he wants to live his life in this new world . And also he literally only kills people because his weapon needs blood and that is why he became a blood demon, he didn't choose this path at all and he never questioned it .

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SinningSword
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Looks good so far, a very fun start, an interesting MC, good plot, all I need to add something to my library but on top of that the grammar is pretty good too! Thanks for the hard work Author!

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Weezyf
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The MC is cool and all acting like a real demon i like It very ruthless and trains and does normal stuff buUuuuuut WTF JULIE!! This women stronger then him sees him for the first time and just beat him up and step on his face and called him worm she just humiliate him like crazy then later she does it again and she forCes mc to do stuff for her or else she beat him up then when the mc was trying to escape he saw her and felt pain in his heart for leaving her ? Wtf how he fall in love with his bully? Heavy disgusting masochist mc fuk its so sad the novel is so good but i cant handle stockholm syndrome shit when the mc is suppoSed to be badass demon which he is except for women

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Wanderingforworks
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I quIte literally have no idea what is hallenijg with the character or the story. The author seems fixated on makijg the characTer some sorT of edgelord god with his personality and Making gIrls around him fAll in love With him for such little reaSons

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DeusaderVulting
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YES and yes. I like this a lot. Zad is the goat and uhh... [Inster filler] [Inster filler] [Inster filler] [Inster filler] [Inster filler] [Inster filler] [Inster filler] [Inster filler] [Inster filler]

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not_an_alien
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