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2021-04-15 15:28

i just want start that i have no idea about stability of updates(i just idk) and the writing quality is ok so {three star} for both of them, also i am just at chapter 33 so idk what happens at ex:page 114 or something happens idk what it is,i am just at page 33. let's start with world background,as far chapter 33, world building is just second coming of gluttony but watered down,it fantasy world with levels, that it really it and the levels do not made a difference,MC just one to two shot everything so why? have it at all? to be honest with you. i thought the world would be like idk a woods with fog and it night time all around at the start, and when the MC show to a town it just reveals to generic fantasy,what if? instead of fantasy it dark fantasy with horror, like the town is silent hill but in a fantasy setting and everyone is off, for word background {two star} for being second coming of gluttony but less interesting thing in the world far as story goes,MC get op almost at the start,then kill everything and get all the women in 30 feet radius of him,that it, very early on the MC get out as a demon two times but nothing happens,MC just run out town,no one comes get him,no wanted posters,nothing happens with it, might as well not have happened in the first,which is a problem that comes up over and over again,the MC can do the worst thing possible and nothing bad will ever come to him at all.{one star} character are just a mess,every one but MC and his women he simp to are just forgettable and bland,so to is the MC, but the MC is well the MC so you can some what remember him a little bit( i say that but i forgot his name lol )if you cut 60 to 70% of the character,the story well mostly stay the same,most character are just there to die,that it. for the MC idk what his deal is, he just kill anything, that not personality, that a hobby,he and female lead hate each other very much but for no reason at all?!?! that do 180 and love each other?!?!?!(one star) WQ:3 SOU:3 SD:1 CD:1 WB:2 the total score is 2.0 but maybe a 2.3 or2.4

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no matter how bad a novel is you will find 5 stars reviews with full of passion

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yup just read it and its terrible dont even get me started on the "romance" which is beyond forced.. No one does anything to the dude in which was literally possessed by a demon and indiscriminately painted the town red. Ive realized this site has sooo many things that are bad but have 4+ star reviews its because of the bots

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