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not_an_alien
not_an_alienLv35yr
2020-01-20 06:29

The writing has no flaws and the story development is quite nice. The stability in updating could be a lot better. There's a good amount of world background as well. The characters are really good and you can notice that the knife has given Mike a more violent personality.

Blood demon leveling

zad1333
4.3
210 Chs

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zad1333
zad1333Author

First I thought this was a review for my other story, then I read "The writing has no flaws" and realized it was this novel xD... Anyway it's good to see that my two years of writing have robbed off on the stuff I write, at least a bit... Anyway thanks for the kind words and I know the update quality could be better but I can't do better at the moment, Sorry about that anyway I hope you continue to enjoy my story :)

5yr
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not_an_alien
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I will

zad1333:First I thought this was a review for my other story, then I read "The writing has no flaws" and realized it was this novel xD... Anyway it's good to see that my two years of writing have robbed off on the stuff I write, at least a bit... Anyway thanks for the kind words and I know the update quality could be better but I can't do better at the moment, Sorry about that anyway I hope you continue to enjoy my story :)
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