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Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv44yr
2020-06-02 06:51

Ok.....I guess. However, the problem is there are way too many cliches which makes it quite boring. Probably only the star wars system itself is the most interesting part as it provides mc star wars stuff/people in a generic typical fantasy world. What is most cliche and annoying is the humans oppressing demi-humans crap and mc somehow being angry and quite righteous about it. I swear, I saw EVIL MC tag so why does mc care about non-human slavery if his inspiring to be something of a sith. (Will my comment be deleted? I GOT.....way to many comments deleted for any sort of criticism in this site:P)

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Unholy_Student
Unholy_StudentAuthor

he is not evil at the start, its called character development.

Unholy_Student
Unholy_StudentAuthor

Also I’m not like most other authors I will not delete bad reviews because I prefer that any potential readers know what they get themselves into, as well as our MC came from a modern society so of course he not pro slavery.

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

That makes sense but I hate it when mc tries to force their own modern beliefs on medieval/ancient societies. For example, slavery was a huge institution so to chance it would be extremely hard/deadly. Also, no matter the character development changing normal decent person to evil is extremely hard without some sort of extreme cases in their lifestyle. And how yr mc is getting strong I don't see it happening. Like how do people even become evil if they aren't already quite dark and don't give the fuk about morally like slavery?

Unholy_Student:Also I’m not like most other authors I will not delete bad reviews because I prefer that any potential readers know what they get themselves into, as well as our MC came from a modern society so of course he not pro slavery.
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

ya,,,,evil is fine but slavery and rape is trash............also, author,,,,u idiot......this is an FF,,,,,,,,i found this **** by luck,,,,put it in the FF section....more people can enjoy........**: is there romance?

Unholy_Student:Also I’m not like most other authors I will not delete bad reviews because I prefer that any potential readers know what they get themselves into, as well as our MC came from a modern society so of course he not pro slavery.
Unholy_Student
Unholy_StudentAuthor

I would if I could, I do not have an option to move it over to fan fiction

amaturewriter:ya,,,,evil is fine but slavery and rape is trash............also, author,,,,u idiot......this is an FF,,,,,,,,i found this **** by luck,,,,put it in the FF section....more people can enjoy........**: is there romance?
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

its there next to the novel....IDK, either, books dope...kinda sad that others wont find it..but eh...GL

Unholy_Student:I would if I could, I do not have an option to move it over to fan fiction
Unholy_Student
Unholy_StudentAuthor

It’s not next to the novel, it was at the begging of creating the book but now it’s gone

amaturewriter:its there next to the novel....IDK, either, books dope...kinda sad that others wont find it..but eh...GL
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