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2021-03-28 14:39

Don't drop it take it slow and make a chatper when you can. This story is hard to write because its star war so we do not expect it to get loads of chatpers in a short while of time. and if your thinking of making a new novel that is like star wars but not hard to write try Stargate atlantis?

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If you're a fan of short chapters, minions from every gacha who do all the work and a shallowly featured main character of Little depth after the isekai experience, then this is the story for you. Basically there is almost no story, just lottery draws that tend to give minions for the MC to put to work, not that much of it is featured beyond a sentence or two, it's mostly on to the next draw shortly there after. I was initially excited about a Starwars system in a fantasy world. Having a force user in the mix could be really awesome, such as stopping mages their fireballs n **** in mid flight, only to turn them back or redirect them. You know, the cool stuff. Instead you get this, some dude who relies on minions drawn from the Starwars universe and doesn't do much in battle. The story itself doesn't seem to put much elbow grease in world nor character building either, so all I can commend it on is its release rate and decent grammar. The concept had a lot of potential, but unfortunately the cool stuff isn't the focus, minion gathering and lotteries are. My guess is that he's going to take over the country soon, as he's training his minions using a dungeon.... But I expect atleast a dozen more chapters of lottery draws with minions resultant from that first. I mean no offence to the author but I sincerely feel that the potential of the story, the character and its world are wasted by the immense shadow the constant minion lottery rewards casts. Its frustrating, since the first chapter created such high quality expectations.

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