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PionikeLv133yr
2021-03-25 00:41

All my problem with this story is the grammar. grammatical error such as incomplete sentence, sentence that doesn't make sense, double conjunction, etc. it's bothering.. but I just read a few chapters in the beginning. people said that the author has improved. maybe you really have to deal with it first after all..

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Auroraaa
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From chapter 60 or so, I have improvised the double conjunctions n space issues. As for the grammar issues, there are minimal grammar issues from chapter 100 onwardsπŸ™‚

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Leahcollins
LeahcollinsLv10

Okay, so let me give a very honest review here. When I started this book a few months back, I dropped it not long after because of the writing quality and grammatical errors. But there was something about this book and author that didn't let me completely abandon it. I still had this in my library. And I couldn't control myself from reading it again when I saw a lot of chapter updates. To my pleasant surprise, the author has improved her grammar, and included with her amazing writing style, it makes the whole thing so beautiful and it's really worth it.. As I see it, the previous chapters are on the editing process too.. Let me get to the story, we get to see Tang Li, the FL as a strong and cold CEO but the twist is that she can be a fox at times. As for Mo Yuhan, the ML, he is like the demon Emperor....errr... everyone is so froghtened my him..He is cold and ruthless to the point that people call him an iceberg and devil.. But the devil innocently got abducted by a certain fox, that is our FL... Like a lamb who is waiting to be slaughtered, he got coaxed to marry her. When it comes to her, he is nothing like himself, he becomes soft hearted and helpless, a complete doting husband. Moreover, we get to see an overprotective brother of our FL who falls for ML's sister while always cursing the ML for stealing his sister. It has that mystery essence, ther is no rape or major misunderstanding, doting husbands, 4-5 couples are there I guess, all fluffy, sometimes romantic, sometimes erotic and have adequate snu snu ... I love this novel....This is like a hidden gem...πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“ Keep the superb work going on,....By the way, little author, I must say you're a big fan of Trial Marriage Husband, aren't you?πŸ˜ΈπŸ€­πŸ€­πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ₯°

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