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2023-06-30 18:44

Author tbh this fanfic is way way worse than your 'Overlord-Seraphim' one. It's also quite lame how the MC is predicting something like "We'll make contact if that village is attacked" or "Maybe they're finding a needle in a haystack." MC had no basis for these kind of predictions but saying it anyway to make him look smarter. I'm starting to doubt about "HIGHIQ" tag in this story too, especially when the Floor Guardians in this story seem to be a stupid bunch. It seems the other characters were being downgraded so MC would look smarter. The MC basically think everything and his subordinates only move when they're ordered, unlike demiurge & others in the original who are capable themselves.All the Subordinates do here was Praise the MC lackadaisically and with very poor construct of words even. I like the your other fanfic but this one is thumbs down.

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