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Brilliant story only issues is with the wishes and my description but loving it non the less. Have it explained why Ben is alive ( because mc was in coma Peter didn't think about earning money to impress mj etc so ben wasn't there to be shot) Have mc show up at Tony starks place turn around and do the classic lines about teaming up Have him show up at furys place and explain about the alien invasion and hydra being alivd Have him save - the punishers family, The ancient one Have him start a company with a co named charity for repairs on destruction of fights Have him recruit the villains before they become villains. Example spiderman homecoming villains easily recruitable Non recruitable villains have him kill for example kingpin - in TV shows there are scenes where his group have meetings about daredevil etc could have mc show up and eliminate them all Wipe out the hand or have the hand fight hydra Have him recruit bullseye before avengers so you can have chapter of him and Hawkeye competing. Can tell I think about this alot
Canceled book ^_^
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Sorry I took so long to reply. I would like to hear your opinion of the story so far as I have released a couple more chapters.
Brian_Fisher:And description of mj not my description autocorrect
Love the novel downside you described Peter as spiderman Tom holland but then described mj as kristen's dunst. For me that affects the story due to me not being able to relate etc etc. Second downside is him having majin buys powers (downgraded) - you may or may not have read dragon ball but even weak humans can fly very early on so why would he need spiderman powers
Brian_Fisher:Love the novel downside you described Peter as spiderman Tom holland but then described mj as kristen's dunst. For me that affects the story due to me not being able to relate etc etc. Second downside is him having majin buys powers (downgraded) - you may or may not have read dragon ball but even weak humans can fly very early on so why would he need spiderman powers
MJ looks like comic MJ also. He utilizess his Spider-Man powers because they are cool, not practical.
Brian_Fisher:Love the novel downside you described Peter as spiderman Tom holland but then described mj as kristen's dunst. For me that affects the story due to me not being able to relate etc etc. Second downside is him having majin buys powers (downgraded) - you may or may not have read dragon ball but even weak humans can fly very early on so why would he need spiderman powers
Brian_Fisher:Love the novel downside you described Peter as spiderman Tom holland but then described mj as kristen's dunst. For me that affects the story due to me not being able to relate etc etc. Second downside is him having majin buys powers (downgraded) - you may or may not have read dragon ball but even weak humans can fly very early on so why would he need spiderman powers
