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TalentlessAuthor8mthPostedThis is my buddys book so it may be a little biased but give it a shot, this has good grammer, good world building, a great universe filled with many possibilities. The main character is not going to follow behind the Regresser in this book, David has his own adventures and is going to make a mark on this world. Iâm a sucker for Superhero Books, itâs kinda dark in some chapters but give it a shot
- TalentlessAuthor2yrCommented
This mad weird, bro
"Yay! Anakin is so cool!" Ahsoka continues. "Now that you are my friend we can do things together." - TalentlessAuthor2yrReplied to Abdulaziz_Alamri
Alivee. depressed.
Stragngly, he had 5 primate fingers and toes unlike other members of his race. He was black where Frieza was white and yellow where Frieza was purple. His tail was as large as his body, dragging on the floor⌠but what instantly caught my attention was his eyes⌠They were the same ones that I had seen when I looked in the mirror. - TalentlessAuthor2yrReplied to DragonBallDaoist
Also, this isnât true. Toph didn't have to kill. The people of the underground fighting arena won battles with a ring out.
"By the way, dear sister, I also got wet clothes today and I accidentally nicked my pants with my spear so fix those too," I told her while taking off my clothes and staying only in my underwear. Then I threw my clothes to Katara, who looked at me annoyed. - TalentlessAuthor2yrReplied to Jonnyofsin
He could have just been fighting in the same tournament that toph went to. Undoubtedly, that would have given him exp. He has an ablity that lets him maximize skills extremely fast. He could have chosen to train alone for a month and the system would have given him a quest.
"By the way, dear sister, I also got wet clothes today and I accidentally nicked my pants with my spear so fix those too," I told her while taking off my clothes and staying only in my underwear. Then I threw my clothes to Katara, who looked at me annoyed. - TalentlessAuthor2yrReplied to Wandering_Swordman
He could just leave the water nation. He has power. He has a system for Christ's sake. The quest he would hypothetically be better in a city compared to a tundra. It does make sense why he chooses to be in his situation when if he ventured off, he would be an even better avatar.
"By the way, dear sister, I also got wet clothes today and I accidentally nicked my pants with my spear so fix those too," I told her while taking off my clothes and staying only in my underwear. Then I threw my clothes to Katara, who looked at me annoyed. - TalentlessAuthor2yrReplied to GameMage
You see... That would be the case if it weren't for the fact that there are no repercussions for him acting like his normal self.
"By the way, dear sister, I also got wet clothes today and I accidentally nicked my pants with my spear so fix those too," I told her while taking off my clothes and staying only in my underwear. Then I threw my clothes to Katara, who looked at me annoyed. - TalentlessAuthor2yrCommented
... What a dumb name
"His name is Leviathan the 3rd," I announced, full of confidence. - TalentlessAuthor2yrReplied to EndlessPilgrimage
Simple... Bad writing
Sokka frowned at that, truthfully he didn't mean to hurt his sister with words so much. He didn't have Sokka's memories so to him any mention of his mother will get the same emotional response as if you told him that a woman on the other side of the world died⌠complete indifference. - TalentlessAuthor2yrCommented
why os the mc being so childish when he's reincarnated
"By the way, dear sister, I also got wet clothes today and I accidentally nicked my pants with my spear so fix those too," I told her while taking off my clothes and staying only in my underwear. Then I threw my clothes to Katara, who looked at me annoyed. - TalentlessAuthor2yrCommentedCh 2 Happy Birthday!!!
- TalentlessAuthor2yrReplied to The_All_in_One
No
Stragngly, he had 5 primate fingers and toes unlike other members of his race. He was black where Frieza was white and yellow where Frieza was purple. His tail was as large as his body, dragging on the floor⌠but what instantly caught my attention was his eyes⌠They were the same ones that I had seen when I looked in the mirror. - TalentlessAuthor2yrReplied to Zyes1
That guy must not have done his research considering that in the Sayian saga, Popo had created his set after kamiâs death. They werenât as powerful, but popo wasnât powerful in comparison to the rest of the dragon ball z cast.
"Now⌠When instilling your will upon the Dragon Balls, you have to use a mixture of telekinesis, telepathy, magic materialization, and your pool of Ki for the final touches. It's the heat that melts down an ingot if you will. If the fire is not hot enough, the ingot will not melt." - TalentlessAuthor2yrReplied to Zyes1
I figured, if popo is canonically able to create them, why canât the mc when he is obviously more well versed in magic.
"Now⌠When instilling your will upon the Dragon Balls, you have to use a mixture of telekinesis, telepathy, magic materialization, and your pool of Ki for the final touches. It's the heat that melts down an ingot if you will. If the fire is not hot enough, the ingot will not melt." - TalentlessAuthor2yrReplied to Zyes1
Heâs 5foot in the most recent chapter
"Wow! That movie was so cool! I want to be a hero just like Spider-Man." Shouted Gohan as he and Ice walked side-by-side by. - TalentlessAuthor2yrReplied to Zyes1
No. he cant. think of it as gods having two sets of ki that are mixed. Djin can sense his normal ki
His Ki⌠It was different. Sensing King Kai, I knew for a fact that I was stronger than him⌠But his Ki somehow felt clean⌠It felt⌠bright and lighter. Looking at his aura felt like looking at a shiny polished gem. Comparing him to others, their ki reminded me of ocean water that was heavily polluted while King Kai's Ki reminded me of pure, filtered water that was found in a supermarket⌠no⌠His Ki reminded me of a cloud while the Ki of Aka reminded me of sludge. - TalentlessAuthor2yrReplied to Zyes1
Yeah
I noticed that my right brow had a natural split towards a third of the way to the edge. I had lovely almond-shaped eyes that honestly made me excited for a moment. I looked as if I had created my custom-created character in an MMORPG. - TalentlessAuthor2yrReplied to Zyes1
Crimisom
Observing my body a bit closer, one would notice that my spiked hair had two bangs hanging in front of my face and also made its way down my back. It was wild like Raditz and was reaching my tail, which was now colored red instead of the brown that it was previously. It was also thicker and longer as well, being appropriate for a Saiyan my age. - TalentlessAuthor2yrReplied to Werph
I disagree heavily
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