Review Detail of Shady41 in Journey To Become A True God

Item: Journey To Become A True God
Rating: 2.4

Review detail

Shady41Lv54yrShady41

Cant understand crap the dang thing is machine translated or something. I gived up trying to read this in the 2nd chapter. The MC's is pretty much generic guy who goes on the path of power for the generic reason of saving his life. I dont hate it and would have read it through but the grammer kills it for me.

Journey To Become A True God

DarkForces

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Replies31

francofdLv14francofd

Find a editor!!!tu gramática es horrible!!Soy un lector latino e incluso yo tengo mejor gramática en inglés por favor es una muy buena novela pero casi ilegible

4yr

NerfBastionCatLv3NerfBastionCat

Imagine criticising someones spelling when you yourself Can’t even use Right forms. (T-T)

3yr

NerfBastionCatLv3NerfBastionCat

I understand Spanish...

francofd:Find a editor!!!tu gramática es horrible!!Soy un lector latino e incluso yo tengo mejor gramática en inglés por favor es una muy buena novela pero casi ilegible

3yr

TrAnSfOrMeRLv4TrAnSfOrMeR

3yr

SanleLv12Sanle

it's a good good stories

3yr

SanleLv12Sanle

it's a good good stories

3yr

amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

he is a reader, not a writer

NerfBastionCat:Imagine criticising someones spelling when you yourself Can’t even use Right forms. (T-T)

3yr

LazyBastard00Lv3LazyBastard00

you be like what the f***??

3yr

OtoLv14Oto

Imagine gaslighting a reader for being unable to use 100% proper English. Author’s like these and readers like you are what ruins this site.

NerfBastionCat:Imagine criticising someones spelling when you yourself Can’t even use Right forms. (T-T)

3yr

QCh3ng_RealmlordLv10QCh3ng_Realmlord

can it count as a reply?

3yr

DaoOfLoliLv10DaoOfLoli

The story has a nice feel to it but sometimes I can't understand anything. I gave up reading halfway chapter 1.

3yr

egdlLv2egdl

Cant read past chap1 (;´༎ຶٹ༎ຶ`)

3yr

Inferno_VorLv13Inferno_Vor

I think a machine translation is better lol, this seems manually translated and thrown together

3yr

JutoLv14Juto

It actually feel like it went through more then 2 translation for example the author language then the translator language then English as I compare it to machine translation from the raw which is still not the best but the sentences where in better order then here.

Inferno_Vor:I think a machine translation is better lol, this seems manually translated and thrown together

3yr

reggiegm54Lv1reggiegm54

this is a brain cracking novel grammar is damn bad

3yr

reggiegm54Lv1reggiegm54

the novel foundation And settings is good

3yr

GamingAPPLv13GamingAPP

I couldn't finish first chapter....

3yr

Iamsunny9Lv3Iamsunny9

A retard spoted. Idiot he is a reader not the writer.

NerfBastionCat:Imagine criticising someones spelling when you yourself Can’t even use Right forms. (T-T)

3yr

Milk_Cream_PigLv3Milk_Cream_Pig

does that justify the story's terrible grammar? no. He's not writing a novel, just a review, so he can use whatever contraction, slang, whatever word grammatically wrong as long as it's readable.

NerfBastionCat:Imagine criticising someones spelling when you yourself Can’t even use Right forms. (T-T)

3yr

NerfBastionCatLv3NerfBastionCat

what the **** are you talking about, are you mental?!?! I'm saying the person who commented this criticize the author for not being correct with his grammar, and when he is writing the comment (review I mean) he himself isn't using correct grammar

Iamsunny9:A retard spoted. Idiot he is a reader not the writer.

3yr