Guess u didn't read the earlier chapters I'm guessing. Didn't she mention she was actually recording so she can pretend he tried to rape her? and then she'd use it to blackmail Bern

anyone know what tags are in this? ignore this rggggggxtido6x9yxyocyocy9xyox9ydo96dy9fyofyoyfoyf9yfy9dyp9f6odoyodyo9fyo9d9yd9ydyoxpyxpyxoyd9ydy9dy9d9f968tdurxufxfuxufxtuxifxigxgixigxog

people complaining about how dense he is, meanwhile I'm here lmao at his interaction with Larry

does that justify the story's terrible grammar? no. He's not writing a novel, just a review, so he can use whatever contraction, slang, whatever word grammatically wrong as long as it's readable.

well this was disappointing. Why is his sister right now acting so inconsistent from the first chapters? Also, u should stop using japanese romaji and replace it with something else since it breaks the flow of the story. Heck even 'brother' is fine. And too much curse words that it's just sounding edgy.

Wasn't it mentioned that the the 1st VR game, ppl were trapped for like 18 months or smt? For SAO, it was 2 years I think

Would've been fine but good can he day he fell in love within a couple hours? Bruh. Would've been fine if he never said that but ok

So MC became a cuck? Damn.

By the looks of the art, it looks like Chiyo from Ane Naru Mono by Pochi-goya

He's already in a different world? I didn't see it written anywhere. Ngl author's writing is good but when it's confusing, it's VERY confusing.

I thought the mission was to get something like a dragon seed?

Okay but who is Fen? Is it the worm? Also, where'd that worm come from? I'm liking this novel, don't get me wrong, but I really dislike the sudden, random transitions the author's put up since it can be really, REALLY confusing. I can only hope it'll disappear in future chapters since it honestly breaks the flow of the story and forces me to have to go back and re-read entire paragraphs just to get a sense of what's actually going on. Otherwise, it's all good.

oh okay

Is this even the correct chapter? Bruh. Author, if you see this comment, please reply. For now I'll be dropping this.

So far, premise seems to be interesting. My expectations are up by now. Nice job, author! Hopefully though, quality doesn't take a sudden turn or nosedive down. That would suck... a lot.

Oof Shizu ain't here

Oh dang. So it's not coming back?

Same. I mean, the guy's a pedophile who's been grooming the girl. He deserves it.

Kudos to the author for not using review spam bots to raise ratings tho. That I can respect . I've seen a lot of authors here in webnovel who would shamelessly rate their work 5 stars, ignore constructive criticism, and spam reviews to increase the rating. Atleast this guy is trying to learn.

Review bots, bro... When to is webovel removing them