Review Detail of 8Eight in Will be Right Back

Item: Will be Right Back
Rating: 2.8

Review detail

8EightLv34yr8Eight

Generally alright, grammar is fine, writing is a bit too messy for me, events happen really quick succession, and jump perspective a bit too often for me to fully comprehend what is happening I however do like the government chiming in with statements pretty unique don’t remember it done before

Will be Right Back

Wehttam_Ocsalb

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Wehttam_OcsalbAuthorWehttam_Ocsalb

Thank you so much for such an honest review! I'll do my best to fix my writing succession. And will revise few chapters to fix what's going on. The scenarios are happening a bit too quickly inside my head that I couldn't keep up with the words!! It feels like the world just came into my brain. I just couldn't contain my excitement; however, I thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing a review for my first novel. May the Elune Goddess be with you, my friend. :)

4yr

8EightLv38Eight

Just remember to read through it a few times, and maybe have a good friend read it through aswell I’ve written a little bit myself and it helps a ton But also remember you can’t please everyone no matter what you do

4yr