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ranimah
ranimahLv155yr
2020-04-12 01:06

The story is getting better and better. The characters building are interesting and fulfilling. The way you develop the characters interestingare and fulfilling.

Transmigration: The Narcissistic Cinderella

ShinSungmi
4.5
185 Chs

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Tea_Tae
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Norah_Koch
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So we have a supernatural-themed story with a system. There are vampires, a sarcastic cute system, and a villainous/bad woman with a second chance. This is a 3 chapter review. So far, I LIKE the MC. The start is awesome and u can empathize with the mc... because who isn't a fool in love. RECOMMENDED.

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SplitEric
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Shit! I wish I didn't give my stones up already! I actually get really into vampire stuff. So I'm going to really waste summer hours on this lol. Great job author and Awesome name btw Shin Sungumi.. I love it

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Rose_Vit
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These is story has i original plot even when there is a similar vampire and transmigation theme. The f l is unique, in some points it feels like she needs a modals lessons. Neverteless I strongly recomend you first read Transmigration: The cannon fodder the beauty and the mask beast; in order to understand better. La historia esta muy bien escrita, aunque el tema es muy fantasioso la manera en que esta redactado la hace una historia agradable y aunque con mucho detalle badtante ligera. Sin embargo, insisto hay que leer la primer historia para poder comprender las particularidades del contexto y para empatizar con la protagonista a pesar de su personalidad.

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kazesenken
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The strong point of this novel so far from the chapters I read are: the unique, uncharacteristic female lead and the potential that I see going forward with this kind of story. However, the execution seems a bit messy. The world building is a bit lacking and inconsistent. The dialogue so far is lacking in variety. I would advise to start off with more background and world building, which you seem to do in chapter 4, but seems placed weirdly. I find it difficult to appreciate a MC that so far has little personality other than reacting wildly to the current situation. There needs to be more inner thought and character to make the reader see and sympathize with the MC. I think the story would improve greatly if it was outlined a bit better.

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traygardener
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So we have a supernatural-themed story with a system. There are vampires, a sarcastic cute system, and a villainous/bad woman with a second chance. This is a 3 chapter review. So far, I LIKE the MC. The start is awesome and u can empathize with the mc... because who isn't a fool in love. RECOMMENDED.

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