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DraekaiAuthor2yr
2022-07-05 02:01

It's been about 3 years, so I guess I can be forgiven for only writing a review for my own book now. There is only 1 thing I wanted to say: Yes, I know that arc is bad, you know which one I'm talking bout. I hate it myself too, you don't need to tell me anymore. If I could go back and rewrite the entire thing, I would, but I still needed that arc to set up some things in the future and it's too late to do it at this point so I won't. That's why there's no need to keep telling me how bad that arc was because believe me, I KNOW. There's a reason why I locked this book at such a late chapter and didn't make anyone pay for it until past this particular arc, so if you're the kind of person who can't accept that I'm not perfect and would still make mistakes, then I won't stop you from dropping the book. But you can stop telling me how bad that arc was already because I heard it enough times, know it as a fact myself and it's getting really old. I wrote that 3 years ago for crying out loud. I'm still learning! Anyway, that's all. As for everyone else, thank you for your continued support and honestly I wouldn't have come this far without all of you. Thank you all once again and I hope I can continue to entertain you as long as I write! Oh, and if you haven't already, do join our discord!

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GodKingHuruuLv2

Don't worry about haters, just keep doing good work and you will be fine...

UnknownFate25Lv3

I haven’t read the whole story yet, but I’ve made it past the infamous arc you are talking about, and I think that was the only thing I ever disliked about your book. I’ve been a big fan of it for at least a year now, and I plan on catching up with the rest of the story when I get the chance. Don’t let the haters get you down (which you seem to be doing a good job of) because both you and this book is really awesome.

Sword_daoist19Lv13

what arc are you talkibg about?

UnknownFate25:I haven’t read the whole story yet, but I’ve made it past the infamous arc you are talking about, and I think that was the only thing I ever disliked about your book. I’ve been a big fan of it for at least a year now, and I plan on catching up with the rest of the story when I get the chance. Don’t let the haters get you down (which you seem to be doing a good job of) because both you and this book is really awesome.
DaoistrTQ7YXLv3

probably the one that he go meet with his family

Sword_daoist19:what arc are you talkibg about?
UnknownFate25Lv3

Yes, that one. Make it past that arc, and the story becomes just as good as before. I’d say that arc is this story’s only major flaw. Everything else, from characters to interactions to story, is great in my opinion

DaoistrTQ7YX:probably the one that he go meet with his family
Sword_daoist19Lv13

oh that arc, i actually didn't liked it also and whats up with him losing memories can someone spoil me

DaoistrTQ7YX:probably the one that he go meet with his family
RandomPassbyerLv5

Will there be more side stories

abcdefghi987654321Lv3

The child arc ruin it for me like how terrible it is too much of nerfing and how it terribly executed Hahahahahhahhhaahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahhahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahah Hahahahahhahhhaahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahhahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahah Hahahahahhahhhaahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahhahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahah Hahahahahhahhhaahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahhahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahah Hahahahahhahhhaahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahhahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahah

Lazy_Chicken_GodLv13

My only problem with the novel is Brendan. After he officially became a disciple I considered whether or not I should continue reading the novel but because it's really good otherwise I have continued reading it. I mean I have barely seen any negative review talk about him which surprised me since from my point of view he is the only problem in the whole novel. I honestly don't think that the home return arc was bad enough to just drop the novel and while I agree that some hundred chapters after are mixed between good, bad and boring I also think that the negatives are enough to actually drop the novel. I don't think that you should leave a bad review on a novel like this just because you thought one arc was bad. And If you leave a bad review you should have actual criticism instead of just saying that you started to dislike the novel at some point.

Mr_BabblesLv15

t-thats... um.... that's the author

Lazy_Chicken_God:My only problem with the novel is Brendan. After he officially became a disciple I considered whether or not I should continue reading the novel but because it's really good otherwise I have continued reading it. I mean I have barely seen any negative review talk about him which surprised me since from my point of view he is the only problem in the whole novel. I honestly don't think that the home return arc was bad enough to just drop the novel and while I agree that some hundred chapters after are mixed between good, bad and boring I also think that the negatives are enough to actually drop the novel. I don't think that you should leave a bad review on a novel like this just because you thought one arc was bad. And If you leave a bad review you should have actual criticism instead of just saying that you started to dislike the novel at some point.
Lazy_Chicken_GodLv13

Wait is he a self insert by the author? Because if he is I will feel really bad

Mr_Babbles:t-thats... um.... that's the author
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Abid_8915Lv4

upto which Ch the infamous arc is?

Mr_BabblesLv15

the reviewer here is the author giving himself his opinion of his own novel

Lazy_Chicken_God:Wait is he a self insert by the author? Because if he is I will feel really bad
DraekaiAuthor

I believe he was referring to the other reviews in the review section that is hating on that one specific arc, not this review in particular... I think?

Mr_Babbles:the reviewer here is the author giving himself his opinion of his own novel
TheOne69Lv10

are we getting more chapters for the side stories. after chapter 16. and just don't listen to some bad reviews I liked all of the story. so keep up this good work please. its All for Master.

GreatNerdBeardLv14

the author decided to integrate them going forward, per discussion in the discord.

TheOne69:are we getting more chapters for the side stories. after chapter 16. and just don't listen to some bad reviews I liked all of the story. so keep up this good work please. its All for Master.
KasamplankaLv2

pretty sure chicken god was reffering to the character brendan? and some confusion arose and he though that character is the personofication of the author into the story. like the one guy that made the metal gear solid games that appears in the game... :P

Draekai:I believe he was referring to the other reviews in the review section that is hating on that one specific arc, not this review in particular... I think?
Manmeet_Singh_8886Lv14

could someone clarity?

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godisdumbLv5

the dream arc for me is worse than the home arc

supersmash_dungkiLv2

the homecoming arc is actually funny for a chunny side for me lol

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