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Ossa_Bellator
Ossa_BellatorLv122yr
2022-08-28 20:34

This novel was very good at the start and I found something that could have been comparable to Warlock of the Magus World however the changes in the main character are very stupid and put me off. The mc was an Abyssal Demon Lord in his previous lives in which he has massacred billions and trillions of lives but 'suddenly' in this new one, he gets so angry if some random person from his clan is killed. He's supposed to be merciless and cunning, so instead of offending a highly powerful being, he should try to find ways to ally with them. Why should he care about the death or attack on a person that doesn't even affect him? This could have been an amazing story but instead, is ruined through senseless character changes, it would be much more interesting to read his life when he transmigrated into a demon of the Abyss. Hope author takes it into consideration.

Abyssal Lord of the Magi World

Redsunworld
4.5
1062 Chs

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ToulueVang
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Don't be discourage because of lower audience. Most of the reader don't read until it have at least 200 chapters! :) Your time will come soon. KEEP IT UP!

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Johny_Starcer
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Warning! The author removes any negative review, here you will not find the truth. Do not believe the rating.................................................

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foxytail
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GashGrunt
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Reveal spoiler

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Jadebell
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Better than the story it was based on in my opinion I liked Warlock of the Magus world but I think this stories an improved version and definitely more interesting Good job

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BobbyCSB
BobbyCSBLv13

Overall, this is your stereotypical 'System' based story where the MC relies on the 'System' as their crutch to develop and grow in power. Nevermind that the MC has reincarnated twice and have reached lofty heights in one of his previous lives. The MC is thoroughly reliant on that crutch instead of using his previous experience to get stronger, the MC is painfully immature to the point that you think he wasn't in any position by a servant in his previous lives. I cannot recommend this story despite so many 'glowing' reviews to it. Most of these reviews are just pandering and toe kissing with lack of any substance on why the story deserves its 5 Stars. You want my input? Here. Character Development : 2/5 Story Grounding : 2/5 World Building : 3/5 Sub-Plot & Arching Plot : 2/5 Conclusion: Worth the read only if you have nothing else to read. Or read if you find the story interesting to you. Seriously, leave actual reviews in Author/WebNovel staff. I am appalled that there is a distinct lack of proper reviews from the masses.

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deleterduser322223
deleterduser322223Lv4

Honestly, the story was doing just great in the beginning, but you had to follow the same casual path. What do you even mean by ruler of death and destruction. This guy can't help himself but help every unfortunate soul he will meet, apparently as long as you have a strong 'Will' you are trustworthy. Really!! .do i have to remind you this a world ruled by magi and magi are known to be selfish and pragmatic beings.

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NovelNewbie354
NovelNewbie354Lv5

The author is someone who doesn't care to improve his writing quality (grammar). Some readers are kind enough to correct some mistakes in the comment, but the author didn't event tried to change the pointed mistakes. It's normal if your english is bad. It's stupid if you don't even want to improve what you lacks. But the story is good, so if you can bear the grammar, it's worth to try.

5yr
Aliou_Dibassy
Aliou_DibassyLv1

Same thIng repeats every 100 chapters. Stale to almost non existant story building and has the same bs of I return my favors x100 and hate my enimes x100 young master slapping theme. Not worth your time, keep scrolling.

4yr
foxytail
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