Review Detail of CompleteNoob in How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories

User: Areize (Chapters Read: 6) Good novel start but the more I read the more I feel that the author is deciding for when or when the mc memories of the mc being helpful using fragments memories as an excuse the mc is very beta in my opinion afraid to change the timeline line or take advantage of his power too retarded he gives Info's very easily about himself very self-centered still doesn't realise the world he is in is very brutal and exploitive too dumb and trusty the author seems somewhat researched about the world building yet thereare parts where the world building becomes crucial yet the author seems clueless overall good start yet gets bad in details ------------------------ My Response: Nice Review! Point 1: No offence but do you even know what a Beta means? Have you done your research about the meaning of Beta? So I will entirely ignore that point as it is completely stupid that you speak of Beta but have no idea what it means. Point 2: The Fragment Memories are unpredictable, and I very VERY rarely use this, as for your opinion of I decide when the memories appear? Good Lord Mate you do realize I am writing the book and I HAVE TO DECIDE when the memories come up? No offence once again this is a useless statement. Point 3: You do realize the MC have no idea how the Timeline is going? No offence but you do realize just taking Akeno, Shirone and Ingvild how much he changed the timeline already? Hehehehe, I almost laughed my butt off when I read this part, Once again another useless statement. Point 3.1: YOU DO KNOW I DID SAY THIS IS A BACKGROUND STORY????? *sigh* this is a complete waste of my time writing this summary Point 4: Whats wrong with giving the information towards those he can trust? No offence my friend but do you have a problem wiht the MC making allies and friends? It sounds like you want the MC to become a HERMIT? Besides the information that was giving will not be of much help anyway, so kindly tell me what's up with this? Point 5: Many of your paragraph comments come along with the MC being too passive aggressive but honestly mate you expect every MC in every NOVEL to become a GOD that can smite people left and right? I am not going to waste my time with this. As for World Building, can you provide details of where? Which chapter? etc. Your dishing out quite a lot of complaints but not pointing where? :/ Because I am open to constructive criticisms with evidences which you had not provided. Another point: You read 6 Chapters and already calling the MC a Beta without even understanding the meaning of Beta in the first place. You speak of World Building but it's only Chapter 6?

asaade_ragnarokm Star: 2.5 Review: Dropped at chapter 22 his beta attitude is irritating, also the plot have gone poof, you also need to change the title its misleading it should be how to survive in devil world with a fragmented memories. First off, BETA. I would suggest reading up the meaning behind this word in detail and ask yourself. Being Ordered, or accepting opinions. Which one is the one that makes one appear as a "subservient" to a woman? Accepting girls wanting to be spoilt, is this a servant? or a display of affection. Even my girl ask to be spoilt from time to time, or ask me to do something for her. It does not make me a servant :/ Sorry, it appears my book is too realistic in certain chapters regarding chapters that people consider it BETA. Get over it. That's life Second- Plot went poof? No explanations? Nothing? No different from a reader who flash read and could not figure out what was wrong? Or perhaps you realized too late that my book requires attentive reading? My plots might appear being jumbled up from how much things are appearing all over the place while the MC is busy with one thing. This only shows that things are happening at the background of the MC. Third - My title is misleading? Just seeing that you read only till 22 proves you were nowhere near the canon. -.- How disappointing, I will work harder to force you to read till atleast chapter 150!

naah ,the subservience to woman is called simp and beta is a mc like those overly polite japanese mc who got kicked all time by tsundere or being powerful but hiding abilities and getting bullied to oblivion by some random mob cause they don't want to show their power... if you take a textbook definition then "A beta male is the male below Alpha and an omega male is the lowest ranking male. Since women are more attracted to alpha males than any other type of guy, if you're not an alpha male then you are less attractive to women than you could be." the beta Alpha and Omega are described using mainly the wolf packs....the hate people have for some looser beta japanese mc are what compelling people to hate Novel in which mcs act like that ... specially in places like webnovel where fanfics are supposed to be better than cannon...i have not read your story but based on facts that your response to everyone Saying beta male is , asking them definition of beta male... (if my english is bad ,do note its not my first language)

Honestly speaking, it seems that he is not part of his own harem, he seems like a lesbian harem and he was left out, since they all the time fondling each other when they are bathing and even making each other faint with orgasms.

Well during that time (Chapter based) The MC was young and he restraint himself. Since he is a marraige before *** kind of guy

but that doesn't mean that all of them do those things, honestly it even felt a little bit ntr even though it really isn't ...

can you put shuri venelana misla penemue grayfia griselda gabriel lady sitri / fenix among many more to the mc harem?

can you put shuri venelana misla penemue grayfia griselda gabriel lady sitri / fenix among many more to the mc harem?

Shuri? No Venelana? No Misla? No Grayfia? No Griselda? No Gabriel? No Lady Sitri? No Lady Phenex? No Reason? #1 This is not a Netori Novel, so I will not destroy marraiges just because of a wish fulfillment. -.- (Please note: The MC did not steal any girls since he already had them before the canon mc. So it's not classified as NTR) #2 - Gabriel is simply impossible, her personality especially makes it impossible to become a member. Unless I change it drastically like some fanfictions, which I will not do. Too much of a hassle. #3 - Griselda? The MC is not Diodora, he does not have a Nun Fetish lol

so you can not put it: / that bad, the same luck with the story

User: Kenrio Review: I love all your fanfic but I'm giving you one star because of the pathetic god title you give masaru 'wonder child' I become extremely disappointed in this story and lost all my enthusiasm I am only wanting that you end this faster now for you continue the other fics Response: 1 Star just for the God Title? ... Really?

well... what a short fuse author, also low points. sigh... not even mature to respond with professionalism ( or simple manners really.) oh well, I suppose it's your life. but I doubt that you'd improve if that's how your ego treating everyone that points your flaws to improve then I'll leave you alone SMH.

why not misla? is she even married when the beal want to kill her? its actually better if she joins the mc at least she will be happier with mofu mofu time

So he doesn't do a lewd thing with them until marriage but the women will do a lewd thing between themself? Is this even the harem of the mc lol!!! Not to mention there is a romance tag?? If his supposed romantic interest can't wait with him for the marriage and do a lewd thing with the other women then that can't be called romance... I am so lucky that I saw this!!! I never liked too much yuri content in harem and romance tags but this now is over the top...

And it's not supposed to be an NTR, the only reason it's not an NTR is because of technicality.

Tch, all of these are political marriages it woyldn't surprise if this universe actuqlly exist they would cheat eachother

beta guy

You are supposed to keep the bad reviews of those who DROPPED this novel so it can reflect in the median review score and not hide reviews here, too bad your tiny self-control couldn't overpower your over-inflated ego to allow a fair rating & reviews for new readers to judge for themselves if they want to read this