I really like it. It's a really good story to me at least. Yeah, it might not be the best story but it's at least a good read if you're bored. It has it's flaws but doesn't every story?
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LIKENo problem. And hey. You're grammar is really good. There are a few flaws but I mean. I speak English and I still make a ton of mistakes. Even with the flaws in your story I still read it and enjoyed it. Keep it up :)