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2020-04-05 11:53

Man please give the mc more of a life than this. I mean it’s cool watching him be op but when there’s no real goal or direction, it becomes meaningless. He literally became the embodiment for almost all knowledge at 6 years and it only took 2-3 chapters for that. Quite a bore to read at that point.

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The first few chapters, specifically the MC's life before college, is to give a background of sorts concerning the MC. I didn't really want to prolong the early years of the MC, because that's chapter filler. More will be revealed about the MC as the chapters continue, showing the cynical and selfish nature of his, which further intensifies with his powers. This changes as he meets more and more beings and people around the world, and outside of the world. Actually, his two main, original goals to just to survive and enjoy what life has to offer, and find out the truth about his transmigration, really. And to do that, he needed to have the sufficient strength to do so. The others, such as "protect my family and friends" and "never be affected by betrayal", were some of the goals that will develop as the story develops. Concerning the embodiment of knowledge, he only has access to the servers of Eta country. The other countries are not accessible. As the chapters go by, the absorption of information, is well, just a MC shield so the MC can pull **** out of his head easily when explaining his actions, and what not. In the future, like around 20, 25 chapters from the current release, the truth about the system and what it is will be revealed. Please take note, that Eteria is merely the starting point. What the chapters you read and the following chapters for Eteria arc is merely to prove how he is way above the others and well, stronger. Once he enters the Universal stage, however, he realizes he's not really special, and some of those that are like him, will want to kill him, absorb his comprehension, or make him their slave. Thank you for leaving a review. I hope to receive more criticism like this, so I can further improve the reading experience.

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Super, thanks that was very informative of you. Now I can get back to it in anticipation of his character development first. Secondary reasons would probably be for what kind of new things he’ll face in the future. Good plans. Let me follow and see how you do

Silent_Dawn:The first few chapters, specifically the MC's life before college, is to give a background of sorts concerning the MC. I didn't really want to prolong the early years of the MC, because that's chapter filler. More will be revealed about the MC as the chapters continue, showing the cynical and selfish nature of his, which further intensifies with his powers. This changes as he meets more and more beings and people around the world, and outside of the world. Actually, his two main, original goals to just to survive and enjoy what life has to offer, and find out the truth about his transmigration, really. And to do that, he needed to have the sufficient strength to do so. The others, such as "protect my family and friends" and "never be affected by betrayal", were some of the goals that will develop as the story develops. Concerning the embodiment of knowledge, he only has access to the servers of Eta country. The other countries are not accessible. As the chapters go by, the absorption of information, is well, just a MC shield so the MC can pull **** out of his head easily when explaining his actions, and what not. In the future, like around 20, 25 chapters from the current release, the truth about the system and what it is will be revealed. Please take note, that Eteria is merely the starting point. What the chapters you read and the following chapters for Eteria arc is merely to prove how he is way above the others and well, stronger. Once he enters the Universal stage, however, he realizes he's not really special, and some of those that are like him, will want to kill him, absorb his comprehension, or make him their slave. Thank you for leaving a review. I hope to receive more criticism like this, so I can further improve the reading experience.
Silent_Dawn
Silent_DawnAuthor

Thank you! I do plan to show in the future that Xander, the MC, is more than just a cool-headed, rational kid. He will experience pain and regret too and will act sometimes against his own rationality to protect the friends he have (or is it really friendship, and not subordination? Who knows for now.).

Dark_Raine:Super, thanks that was very informative of you. Now I can get back to it in anticipation of his character development first. Secondary reasons would probably be for what kind of new things he’ll face in the future. Good plans. Let me follow and see how you do
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Hi, author here! First and foremost: Thank you for visiting this book and looking at it. If you want to read it, be my guest. If you want to comment or clarify things about the book, be my guest. I'll try to respond as quick as I can. The novel has elements of Fantasy, transmigration, and futuristic factors. Magic and technology co-exist, and the former develops the latter. The MC seems to start very strong, but realizes the God who gave him abilities used a hole in his requests, causing him the need to cultivate and be a magician, striving for Godhood (or more). He has the mind of a mid to late 20s man living in a futuristic world, and he is a cynic and values his life and safety above all else. He is rational, and calculates everything to the best that he could whether it is good for long term or short term periods. He has little to no romantic relationships being developed. He is open minded. Technically, he was a bisexual before he reincarnated, so anything goes for him. He would experience ambiguous scenarios with different species of different sexes, but 99.99% of the time, nothing romantic will develop. (Because he analyzes everything objectively and distantly these things) He has a set of general goals, which is: - Live safely, but discover the world, the universe, the Great Void. - Be powerful enough to protect those who he considers family and friends. - Never be affected by betrayal. - Find out the truth behind the "benevolent God" that sent him in Eteria's universe. Well, I hope you would love it. Thank you once again.

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