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SirMemes
SirMemesLv34yr
2020-04-09 07:52

Sorry I’m not really good at putting my thoughts to words. This story is really well and I really enjoy reading this! It’s always cool to see creative ways to make power systems, use powers, etc!

Time Twister

Silent_Dawn
4.7
81 Chs

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Silent_Dawn
Silent_DawnAuthor

Hi, author here! First and foremost: Thank you for visiting this book and looking at it. If you want to read it, be my guest. If you want to comment or clarify things about the book, be my guest. I'll try to respond as quick as I can. The novel has elements of Fantasy, transmigration, and futuristic factors. Magic and technology co-exist, and the former develops the latter. The MC seems to start very strong, but realizes the God who gave him abilities used a hole in his requests, causing him the need to cultivate and be a magician, striving for Godhood (or more). He has the mind of a mid to late 20s man living in a futuristic world, and he is a cynic and values his life and safety above all else. He is rational, and calculates everything to the best that he could whether it is good for long term or short term periods. He has little to no romantic relationships being developed. He is open minded. Technically, he was a bisexual before he reincarnated, so anything goes for him. He would experience ambiguous scenarios with different species of different sexes, but 99.99% of the time, nothing romantic will develop. (Because he analyzes everything objectively and distantly these things) He has a set of general goals, which is: - Live safely, but discover the world, the universe, the Great Void. - Be powerful enough to protect those who he considers family and friends. - Never be affected by betrayal. - Find out the truth behind the "benevolent God" that sent him in Eteria's universe. Well, I hope you would love it. Thank you once again.

4yr

elano77
elano77Lv12

Wow. Just wow. I am speechless. This book is an amazing one. The Author has a deep knowledge of many aspects and it shows in his work. The world-building is measured, the MC relatable and sensible, the other characters are developing steadily and the story is unique. The author's take on space-time powers is perhaps one of the best I have ever read. The story itself has depth and there is a specific, in-depth explanation for every phenomenon in the story. It is truly an amazing novel. We understand the different character motivations yet there is still a measure of suspense. Author, you have done a fantastic job and I would definitely recommend this novel for anyone who wants to read it. You will not be disappointed.

4yr
yaboihae
yaboihaeLv11

This is criminally underrated because the story talks about time and space concepts like he has a degree and brings up ideas I never thought about.Op protagonist though it could be a positive or negative but it doesn't bother me.

4yr
Ethan132
Ethan132Lv14

Honestly if this book doesn’t deserve 5 stars in everything then no book does, it is a well thought out book with thought that transcends most authors ability’s to provide reason to the power the mc has. Amazing book well done author and thank you!!!

4yr
Doverow
DoverowLv14

I find this whole story pointless. why do I find it pointless? This is because he could have just gone to every empire (not just empires but others things too just working on the info I have) in the universe to get info on ways to get to god rank or to max rank. He could have then went to some random planet and stayed there until he can overrule the universe or multiverse. But this is a story meant for reading that does not happen even though everyone would probably do the same if put in the same place.

4yr
7Setin7
7Setin7Lv5

I hope to see more soon, this is a very long story ... XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP

4yr
Nereid
NereidLv12

First off, love the way space-time powers are used. On of the few stories where I can legitimately see that a young child would be able to be that much of a genius. And the way scientific terms are wound in is good. My main issue is I can’t really relate to why he is so desperate to travel out of the world(enough to spend hundreds of years researching one spell)- I may have missed something? And the lack of emotionally meaningful side characters.Though I’m only around 30 chapters in so may develop in future. Anyway good writing- keep it up:)

4yr
Lord_Fujin
Lord_FujinLv5

It's a very well written webnovel, unfortunately I'm feeling a Yaoi vibe and it's just not my area. ....................... ....................... ......................

4yr
Yousef_Amayri
Yousef_AmayriLv14

Thanks for this amazing novel I liked it actually very much but there is a point I am not sure why did you make him very cruel to all the people that maybe will effect him a bit bad by erasing them from the universe like that woman husband and her 2 children or grandchildren and remove the teacher if you look closer they are not bad people they just question him you could make the teacher forget everything from what happened??

4yr
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