The author takes his time to write the story and places great importance on the details, which is not to displease me. The narration and grammar are of a very good level on top of that which gives a very pleasant reading. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Well crafted story so far! An enjoyable read with a relaxed pace that provides the time to really enjoy the descriptive richness of the setting and characters. A good blend of content, sometimes feels like a slice of life with farming and commerce, other times action and intrigue. Characters are more developed and complex than many other novels on this site, and I can’t wait to find out how things turn out. Feels like there are a more plot points being started than those being concluded, so the story seems to have long term potential. Which is good. I’d pay to read this.

First of all, I can't judge your grammar because my grammar sucks too. I don't have any advise regarding grammar except using Grammarly. Well, your writing is smooth and diligent. I was able to easily portray the story because of that. Second, the development of the side characters are good too! Most novels and stories doesn't even bother to put any development to the side characters but you did. I praise you for that. Lastly, the world background is interesting too and this story definitely has a potential. Well, keep up the good work!

I really liked this book for many reasons. While there are only four chapters out, the author has greatly impressed me with character writing as well as attention to detail. These two, so far, are the strongest parts of the story in my opinion. As far as character writing goes, the reason I loved this part is because of how the author has been able to 'show' the characters, especially the MC and Garun, through their actions and dialogues. I now have general feel for both of them and while I may need to read more to actually start loving them, I can safely say that I really like them already. Attention to detail, well, this is just something that you either do well or don't. The author did it well. Right amount of detail at right amounts of time was given. The only time I felt this aspect a little out of proportion is the first chapter. As people, we are all knowledgeable and passionate about different things. I can assume that you like talking about farming and soil and related things. However, your readers aren't bound to be the same. I am not telling you to not talk about what you like. In fact, it's best if you do. Just, I think it would be beneficial to do it slowly, through a no. of scenes rather than just one or two. So far, so good. I get the world-building feel from this book and will be excited to see what world-building we get further down the line. Keep up the good work, author!

I dont like this novel. As a novel its decent, but instead of telling a story author seems only interested in trying to create philosophical debates i only read 2 chapters before i dropped it. And the amount of background of characters is little, amount of information of what is going on is enough for readers to understand some things Amount of philosophical spout is way to much

Never knew a web novel can reach a level of such heights that I can only say its a magnificent art piece. The diction is exemplary, the minutiae is explicated beautifully, the world rendered realistically. Characters carry depth and emotions, plots are intriguing and exciting, and I am looking forward to the expanding world and its myriad creations and their happenings with the characters Keep up the good work, my dear Author / and the translations faithful, dear translator

One of the best written slice of life stories I've read and not just on this site. The author has managed the delicate balance of excitement, character growth and world building, rarely seen done well in this genre, with skill and care that I'm sure we all wish the other stories of this type had. I'm more then happy that I can read this story and as much I would love to keep it all to myself (beautiful and delicious treasure that it is) this world is one that should live in the minds of all the readers it can as every good story deserves

An excellent book. The world building is detailed and original. The characters are multifaceted and relatable. I love that this is the only story I've read in which the protagonist has a racist upbringing and actually struggles against it. Not unilaterally denies it, but struggles to adapt to a reality where it cannot be justified. This book agnolages that denying your upbringing can be painful even if nessecary.

Wonderfully complex characters living in an equally complex, mysterious set of connected worlds. The first few chapters had me hooked, especially the intense emotions of a rocky start. And then the writing kept me hooked, especially the self-deprecating humor and dry wit of the main protagonist. It was refreshing too, to read a story where there is a powerful and heartwarming support system (I mean people, a place, and logic; not a cheat system) for the MC. I think the character interactions, the pacing- well interspersed pieces of action in a generally slice-of-life setting, and the depth of the world building are the highlights of the story. A point for the future- I would be relieved if the writing style remains consistent. Right now, it’s wordy, a bit prosaic, but quite engaging.

this story is one of the hidden gems of this website. it is definitely on par with commercially sold novels, if not better. the depth of this story is astonisching. every person and place has a history, every character is unique and every action they do comprehensible and understandable. you can clearly see the characters change and develop, at a steady and very natural feeling pace. personally i appreciate the fact that the MC doesn't grow too fast. any progress comes with a suitable amount of effort needed to get to that point. ...though it does feel like the MC never runs out of money, even though he buys a lot.