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This story is great!... The life drama is realistic and I believe it 'Cause The older I get the more that I see my parents aren't heroes They're just like me And loving is hard, it doesn't always work, you just try your best not to get hurt

I love kingdom building and I’ve been searching for it so I hope this novel is supper good ass it goes on and don’t drop the novel!!!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

This is one gigantic convoluted mess of unconnected plotlines bundled together in a confusing way. Half the time you won't even know what the f#*k you're reading.

Really entertaining and thrilling novel. The concept of time-travel is well explored. MC and other characters are well built with multiple POVs allowing for greater immercsion in the story.

Ok... i never use this but the novel is great... with big great and i love this novel ...................................................................................................................................................................................................

Very weird story progression. Firstly, the "extra" contained vital info that would make the book ten times more confusing without. Additionally, the book is all over the place. It's just confusing when there is no explanation where you are, when the MC can see the future etc.. All the author has to do is put time and location stamps everytime a scene swaps. Then there is the random focus on side characters; honestly, it's hard to tell what's going on most of the time when the story is so choppy. Yes, character building is fine. However, in the middle of character building, I also have to go through the author acting mysterious about the two characters that are being developed? Finally, the stupid smile the MC has. I've never encountered a book that made me hate a MC smiling. The emphasis on it gets really annoying(its truly obnoxious.)

I read this story somewhat. I was then looking for books on amazon and saw a pretty much exact copy of this book on there dont know if its you or not. Story is called System Overlord by Oreya Kane

I don't have much time to write up a long-winded review, but I wanted to get this posted before I forget. As requested on the forums, I gave the first 11 chapters a read through. I was thoroughly entertained. The grammar could use a bit of cleaning, but the story carried itself well without causing any confusion. The world seems fascinating, while the characters all have decent and mostly realistic dialogue, allowing me as a reader to fall into the story easily. I did skim ahead to the R-18 chapter, but more out of my own curiosity than anything. I don't typically read novels with steamy content, but I applaud the author for taking the risk and making things seem as tasteful as they can be. Your stability of updates seems great, but I'm not one to talk - being that I tend to fluctuate my releases from once a day to even having months in-between chapters. Altogether its a fun story with a competent writer, what's not to like? =D

Great story! I like system! Also author-san may want to add 'game elements' on tagging? because of how detailed those status. Good chapter length as well. Excellent work. Keep it up.. :)